|Reviews for Love Comes Last|
| HaveFaithAndBelieve chapter 14 . 12/12/2010
This might possibly be my current favorite story! I love that Bella is still true to her feelings despite how Edward make act. Women too often will the need to react when hurt by going out and finding another man or whatever and I'm glad Bella isn't doing that. She is being true to her feelings and that is important. Would love an EPOV to see what he is thinking. I truly believe he has feelings or Bella and he has to see that she loves him. So I don't get why he got with Vickie. Did he actually sleep with her? I'm assuming so. But I still love both Edward and Bella! Excellent work!
| me chapter 14 . 12/12/2010
PLEASE UPDATE ASAP SOOOOOOO BEYOND AMAZING.
| crissy47 chapter 14 . 12/12/2010
Oh I feel so bad for Bella...I know this was just an arrangement, and she has loved him from the beginning but I know Edward has to love her too...Maybe he thinks that Bella doesnt love him? And he is doing the right thing by detaching from her? Love it and I love the angst!
| jane1292 chapter 14 . 12/12/2010
you are so bright, a great wrighter!
| meemo34 chapter 14 . 12/12/2010
Great story! Well, Bella needs to start treating this marriage as the "arrangement" he keeps throwing in her face and start making herself a little less available to Edward now - since he has done nothing to show her that he cares or appreciates what she has done for him. "Arrangement" or not - that was just a crap move on his part to flaunt his "co-worker" in the middle of a restaurant in the middle of the day - he's got to be the biggest idiot ever. I wish Carlisle would have found him instead - that would have been epic! Keep up the great work!
| tazzded chapter 14 . 12/12/2010
I really hate you...you made me cry. The worst thing is we knew this would be happening...the marriage thing ending, but I still couldn't help but hope that Edward would realize how Bella feels about him.
Great chapter...with tears and all.
| pmk kelly chapter 14 . 12/12/2010
love this story love the way its going cant wait for the nxt ch please update asap
| mamasutra chapter 14 . 12/12/2010
loved the chapter. I want Bella to keep up her end the bargin and then leave him so that way he figures out that he needs/loves her and has to figure out how to win her back.
| Sabi'sSookie chapter 14 . 12/12/2010
I just found this story and I am absolutely in love with it! It is quite possibly one of the best stories I have read in a long time! My heart is breaking for Bella and I am not ashamed to say that I cried like a big baby when they got married and again in this chapter. I need more, and am willing to bribe you to get it... although i'm not sure what I could bribe you with. Hmmm, i'll have to think about that one. Oh, and can I kick Edward's ass, just a little. I promise I won't hurt him too bad ;)
| Tiakie chapter 14 . 12/12/2010
I had the shakes reading this and actually felt sick. I know it is an arrangement but they were supposed to be faithful and obviously I am rooting for Bella lol! The fact that you have brought these characters to life and made me care is a testament to your writing skills. Thank you - Am thoroughly enjoying it xxx
| Lotus11 chapter 14 . 12/12/2010
I love and E/B story w/a HEA, however, can there really be one w/the way Edward has behaved? I would love to see Bella w/someone will love her and treat her the way she should. I understand that she signed up for this charade, but boy he has not shown to have any redeeming qualities that make me think he deserves to have her at all. Maybe she can move to London after the divorce and find herself a sexy british man like RP. Maybe a teacher, that will love her wholly, and truly cherish her. Please give us some hope that he is not as despicable as he seems b/c he is making Carlisle look pretty good right now. He may be evil, but at least he's being up front about it.
| Anne chapter 14 . 12/12/2010
Honestly, I understand what you've been saying about the name of the story..but it's been 14 chapters, and the same thing happens: Edward's an idiot, and Bella forgives everything like a martyr. I don't even want them to get together anymore. He's been taking advantage of her (even if he's always with his guilty face on) and she's a stupid woman. I really thought this story was going to be good, and I'm tired of the same stuff over and over again.
| Bella Baby24 chapter 14 . 12/12/2010
Wow. I can't believe Edward. Yes, their marriage is a sham, but he should have more respect for Bella than to publicly flaunt an affair. She has given up everything for him and he can't manage to keep his business private? I am furious with him. Bella needs to rip him a new sshole. He should know better than to put her in this position. Now she will be seen as a doormat and a fool. I'm really interested to see how we get to the prologue. Thank you for writing!
P.S. I'm glad you decided to do some skiiping in time!
| Lilacs4All chapter 14 . 12/12/2010
I have lost all resepct for Edward. I really believed that he cared for and respected Bella but obviously he is just using her to get what he wants. He is no better than Carlisle. He's actually much worse.
I hope that Bella does stop sharing a bed with him and distances herself from him.
He'll die if Bella leaves him? Yes, because he'll lose the company he wants so much...filthy bastard
| Insert Fangs Here chapter 14 . 12/12/2010
overcome with such sadness for bella, she done him a favor the least he could do was hold up his side, be discreet for christ sakes... i vote for bella to find her a side piece.. a taste of his own medicine... make him feel the betrayal she feels:)