Reviews for Lover's Token
Amphia234 chapter 1 . 9/22/2014
Aww, cute.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
I like this... It's cute :)
StarLilly Rose chapter 1 . 6/10/2013
I love it! you did a great job with this story!
AinsleyWright chapter 1 . 5/11/2013
I really like this. It was so sweet.
HateMePretty chapter 1 . 5/3/2013
Aw... Cute! Please make more!
Silverstorm489 chapter 1 . 4/27/2013
Good. Fluffy. Have u read palace of stone? It is the sequel. Miri and other academy girls go to asland for a year and brittas wedding. Peder also goes. It is very good
uluvme-realornotreal chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
Well, it has the basic story line, which is good. However, it doesn't really fit with what Miri and Peder would actually do. You need to make them more comfortable. It feels almost as if you put modern people in their bodies, talking and acting as if they were from the here and now. Also; there are a lot of grammatical errors, all based on lack of commas. And the storyline you chose should have a lot of emotion, but it doesn't.
Overall, pretty good for your first fanfic. Keep writing!
Hannah Nace chapter 1 . 10/1/2012
Awwww... that was cute! It was clever of you to incorporate a model of the wooden hawk she had lost! Did you know a sequel is coming out? It's called Palace of Stone, knowing Shannon Hale it will be amazing!
Spottedmask12 chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
Catrina chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
omg! you are soo good! please write more!
Dancer Of Midnight chapter 1 . 2/4/2012
like it?LOVE IT!you should write more and more
InkWoven chapter 1 . 3/21/2011
How sweet! Well done :)
Lmb111514 chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
This is great! Pleasekeep writing greatthings like this!
Ella Granger chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
Awwwwww! That is so sweet! I love it :-)
echotheinferno chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
they are so frikin cute. but im curious as 2 how miris dad will react when he finds out lol.
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