Reviews for Mechanics
Bernarde chapter 2 . 12/1/2011
"I think I know just the way to get you some more meat, boys." LOL.
Bernarde chapter 7 . 10/31/2011
Aw yeah, Dell's a BAD. ASS.
Bernarde chapter 5 . 10/31/2011
I am really liking this story in general, especially this chapter. I can only hope that there is more to come.
Crazy Theatre Chick chapter 5 . 6/11/2011
So Spy forgets English in bed? I may use that...
Crazy Theatre Chick chapter 4 . 6/11/2011
And thus did Dell discover robophillia. The rest is kinda a blur from that point. Seriously though, this is really good.
Crazy Theatre Chick chapter 2 . 6/11/2011
As Clara read this chapter she began humming "A little priest" from Sweeney Todd.

Okay, I am liking this so damn much it's not even funny. I'm with spy on vegetarianism though
Kyte chapter 7 . 2/15/2011
This is just ridiculously wrong. Especially 'cause it's actually funny. xD
alturtle chapter 5 . 1/3/2011
Anon, if you're going to criticize the story, can you at least explain why? Just saying "it's great up until here" and then not even trying to help the author is pretty fucking stupid, and, to be honest, your statement seems a tad homophobic. I mean, having the slash be the specific reason you think the story goes downhill? That doesn't sound good.

Anyway, I liked it. I thought the banter between them was pretty interesting; dialogue seems to be your strongest point. I also liked how you didn't seem to lose sight of the Dell that you were writing, although you took him in a really unconventional direction. And the indulgent porn/torture/whatever was good too.

I just wish you'd hit some inspiration and update this someday. Good luck with things.
anon chapter 5 . 12/29/2010
the fic was great, until the slash.
Spocklady chapter 7 . 11/9/2010





That is all.
Micromyni chapter 7 . 8/9/2010
Medic sure knows a lot of morbid jokes. I wonder where he learned them. XD I'm loving this story and it's black humor. Everyone is very much in character, and I actually think the fact that you don't attempt accents helps increase the impact of it. I would enjoy seeing Dell's interactions with his other teammates, but it's up to you. XD
Zeus of Boland chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
You know, I feel like imaging the freakout when (if) the Team learns why the burgers tasted like chicken really shouldn't be so funny.

I can't wait to see where it goes. Good job on making Engie crazy as all hell! IT WORKED.
Meg The Maggot chapter 5 . 7/22/2010
I haven't laughed this hard in a good, long time. Thanks for the laugh, I also put this on the fanfic recs page for TF2 on Tvtropes.