Reviews for Deceptive Prey
Zutara1267 chapter 1 . 3/16
Amazing. Masturbated to this. Hot!
poisondart18 chapter 1 . 2/17/2014
Enjoyed it even more than Payback. Very creative. Thanks again:)
Guest chapter 1 . 12/22/2013
Please sir can we have some more. Can we have some more chapters pleaze?
KatherineAda chapter 1 . 12/7/2013
Lol the ending was hilarious, another short story of this please?
SixPerfections chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
insanely hot.. with a twist. loved the two on one action. that was HAWT
TheWickedTruth89 chapter 1 . 10/22/2013
Interesting idea, any chance of a sequel?
LastNameClevver chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
Where. Is. Chapter. Two?!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/10/2013
wow very good loved
Ctrogan chapter 1 . 9/3/2013
Понимаю что стоит статус "Полный", но так хочется продолжения этой истории.
FabPezBerry78 chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
beautiful i love :)
Jori-Is-Life chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
Shit...I have some serious shivers right about now...
warmestbloggerever chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
Wow, fucking awesome! Loved the suspense!
Ace Trainer Jessie chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
kick ass !
Lunaris-wind chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
Lol. Love the twist at the end.
Elphaba Cullen chapter 1 . 5/31/2013
Ver my and grat writing as always.

Would love to see this explored more and find out exactly what Bella is,aside from an ancient vamp.
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