You know to be fair if I was a vampire I think I would rather kill humans then animals

This has been an amazing story to read! Sad to see the last update was back in 2012! You’ve done an amazing job with this story!

Would love to read the ending someday!

Thanks for writing this! :)

This story is as frustrating as it is addictive. I love how screwed up their relationship is. I love the complexities & the layers under layers under layers. I want to beat the living hell out of both of them & can’t get enough. I probably should see a therapist about the fact I can find so much value in a fictional toxic relationship. Instead, I’ll just admit that value can be found in even the worst of relationships if you’re willing to dive deep and see what you don’t want to see & admit truths that you don’t want to admit. I’ve been in many relationships that were toxic, abusive or just seemed pointless but every one taught me something. I’m just hoping these two learn to work WITH one another because watching them both self-destruct is frustrating even when you can see it possibly heading somewhere good.

This is probably the best fanfiction I have read in my life. The conversation are fucken crever, the plot, the relationship are deep, I love everything.
Thank you for your hard work

Hope u finish this one

This fic is like constantly being brought near the edge of orgasm and constantly being denied the delicious satisfaction. it's

Cris,
Thank you for your story. I heard about it on Facebook and came running. I devoured it like a crazy person and I absolutely love it, and that's saying something because I usually avoid angst. I hope all is going well with you.

I am so sick of Edward. He's just still being a controlling dickwad and melodramaniac

Love this story and what it could be completed.

I don't usually leave comments on stories that I read but this one I just had to. I read it for the first time about a month ago and was saddened that it's been untouched and unfinished for so many years. I recently picked it back up and reread it and changed my mind about the ending. It doesn't feel like its incomplete. It is such a beautiful love story and sometimes love stories dont have a clear ending or a HEA. If you do decide to add more, great, but I can say that I'm completely happy with how things end for now.

I love this story more than I can properly explain. This is probably the 50th time I've read it. It's one of my go to favs. I really wish we could inspire you to finish it, or at least add a few chapters.
Regardless, thank you for creating a world where this Jasper and Bella exist! I love them both dearly!

It's a great story ...superb fan fiction of Jasper and the first fan fiction that showed the nature and character and Jasper Whitlock hale you've done a great job man

Oh how I wish for more