I see this story isn't finished, but this first chapter sold me... so I'm gonna keep reading:)

I adore this story, I’m hopefully you’ll return to it one day to finish it as I’d love to see where it goes.

I read this story over n over then select randon chapters to read again... this chapter specifically is so fun n funny. It's like Bella n Jasper's relationship as vampires but reversed... ahahaha... jasper sure is reaping everything he's ever done to human bella...

I'm so in love with this story. I like your version of Jasper and Bella!

Omgahh! I love this story so much! This is the fourth time I’ve read it and it never fails to deliver. I laugh, I cry, and I’m always devastated when Jasper finally tells her the truth. Ahhh! Completely gut-wrenching! I hope you return to finish this masterpiece one day! I will be patiently waiting!

I love this story, and hope you're able to come back to it some time. I want so badly for Jasper and Bella to finally be together as mates. You drew me in, and I read without stopping. I'm drained, but it was worth it.

Your story is beautiful

This story is not at all what I expected it to be in a dark and incredible way. Such an interesting way of looking at Jasper and Bella. I have really enjoyed it, and would love more!

I absolutely adore this story! I've read and re-read it several times. I heart Jasper hard, but your version of him is so amazing that I'm in love. I wish with all my heart that you could maybe finish this story? Pretty please? You're the most amazing author ever!

Canon Bella is completely pathetic and insufferably unbearable to a huge degree. Edward, I loathe. I really hope she changes a lot with Jasper as they are my favorite pairing for Bella.

Please come back. There is no other story out there like this. It’s so fantastic

I will never forget this story, as hard as I MAY TRY (damn you for making this too good to get over). There will be times were I move on, and forget for awhile. But then there's a completely OUT OF THE BLUE moment when I think of this fic, then I get all nostalgic... and, well-you know how it goes from there. That's how impactful this was on me. Even after all this time, I STILL remember the part where Bella compares Jasper to a white crayon (for some reason, lol). It was one of my first fanfictions I've read, if I truly think about it. Now here I am, defeated by my urges and succumbing to the swirling abyss of this amazing (tragically incomplete) story once more.

Shame you didn't finish this it's really good hopefully one day you will

Plis consider update again, it would be a sin not to end this incredible story

I really hope you are able to finish the story it is so amazing I've binge read this over two days. I love Jasper and Bella pairings and this was beyond one of the best I've read so far. a completely different takethe struggle was real and so addicting. please finish!