I love this story so much. I come back every couple of months to re-read it since I found it in April 2012. I'm so glad you wrote it, but then again you've ruined every other fanfic for me as they can never live up to this. So thank you for writing something that can still affect me every time I read it.

Really wish you would update :) I love this story I've read it so many times hoping there would be an update

i love this story so much. i cant wait to read more. jasper and bella are just sooo fascinating.

I absolutely love this story. Your writing style is so incredible, Im jealous. I love the way you're portraying the characters, it might as well be an original story, not a fanfiction, because it's so unique and beautifully written. Since it was 2012 that you last updated, I realise you've stopped this story, and it's sad. I've loved every paragraph of it and will look back on it for inspiration. You did a terrific job, thank you for sharing it x

I have mixed luck with Jasper/Bella stories. I always find the BESTEST EVER ones, and that's great luck, and then they end without a conclusion. Haha, sorry, I don't mean to take this out on you, this is just like the fifth time this happened. Anyways, I love this story a lot. It's a really different take on Jasper than in many other JXB stories I've seen. Normally Bella realizes he's just misunderstood and a good person, and here he's like the worst evil there is (well I would argue he's sweet in his own strange way). XD I love it! Also I think the memory loss thing was a really great plot device, even if I do want them to be together already ). I was wondering if you were taking just a really long break, or your inspiration ran away (that sneaky bastard, always getting lost), basically if I should be expecting another chapter. It's going in favorites either way, but you know, I'm not ready for it to end D.

One of the best story I read in FF. Thanks for it.

I wish she just gets her memory back and hopefully update soon

This is fascinating and maddening all in one. How do you come up with this stuff? It's brilliant

I love this, I hope one day you return to finish it :)

A whole year and a half has passed and no Updates I really wish you would reconsider and continue n with this story I was enjoying it so far

I don't read WIP. It just doesn't happen because I hate to be left hanging...I even tried locating it on other forums (twlighted) but it isn't there.

With that being said, I'm glad I started to read your story. Your Jasper and Bella characters are unlike anything I've read before. Most Jasper's hate fighting/sparing with their Bella's and yet yours seems to prefer it. Your characters aren't afraid to manipulate one another and put their own survival first. It's a breath of fresh writing. Thank you.
If you never finish this story, know you still did good. And on the off chance you do finish, know you have at least one more follower who will be more then happy to continue reading.

I have been a patient, loyal reader since FLL was still a WIP. I also hate when people beg for updates, so I'm not doing that. However, I just want to let you know that I have enjoyed your stories for years, and am looking forward to this one being completed. Hope you are will, and your awesome life is just not allowing you time for FF!

This is twisted, awesome, and different. Please update soon.

Oh, I have really loved what I have read thus far. I really hope you are able to update soon.

CAUTION - SPOILERS... Sorry people, I'm too lazy to review until I get to the end...

Oddly, I found myself both loving and hating this Jasper and Bella.
Which in some ways makes the characters more real to me. I don't think actions in real life are always rational or justifiable, nor are reactions typically circumspect...

However- I had a difficult time reconciling what I read in BPOV with JPOV. I found Bella to be slightly (and sometimes majorly) unbelievable in how well she suffers through Jasper's indifference and cruelty - but then to find he'd loved her all along? Whiplash! How can any romance persevere through that much miscommunication?

And working in the premise that mates are chosen and not fated... well, Jasper doesn't appear as worried as he ought to be - despite his underhandedly binding them... (which doesn't appear to have effected much.)
Maybe that comes next?

All over, the writing is good, the storyline is solid - but the romance needs a little work to be realistic.

I, of course, share what appears to be the the opinion of 4,000 others when I say that I'm disappointed the story may or may not ever be completed... but not enough to say more than thanks for what you did post.
Having spent countless hours writing my own stories I can truly say sometimes you need a break - and sometimes motivation is completely lost. Fucking A. Don't let anyone make you feel bad about it.

Valiant, well written effort regardless!

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