This fic is like constantly being brought near the edge of orgasm and constantly being denied the delicious satisfaction. it's

Cris,
Thank you for your story. I heard about it on Facebook and came running. I devoured it like a crazy person and I absolutely love it, and that's saying something because I usually avoid angst. I hope all is going well with you.

I am so sick of Edward. He's just still being a controlling dickwad and melodramaniac

Love this story and what it could be completed.

I don't usually leave comments on stories that I read but this one I just had to. I read it for the first time about a month ago and was saddened that it's been untouched and unfinished for so many years. I recently picked it back up and reread it and changed my mind about the ending. It doesn't feel like its incomplete. It is such a beautiful love story and sometimes love stories dont have a clear ending or a HEA. If you do decide to add more, great, but I can say that I'm completely happy with how things end for now.

I love this story more than I can properly explain. This is probably the 50th time I've read it. It's one of my go to favs. I really wish we could inspire you to finish it, or at least add a few chapters.
Regardless, thank you for creating a world where this Jasper and Bella exist! I love them both dearly!

It's a great story ...superb fan fiction of Jasper and the first fan fiction that showed the nature and character and Jasper Whitlock hale you've done a great job man

Oh how I wish for more

Hello Cris,

I finished reading your story a couple of months ago but it sticks in my head and I just wanted to thank you.
It doesn't even matter that you didn't finish it, it's so unique and good that you can really be proud of it.
You probably don't check your account anymore and you might have totally moved on from fandom, but i wanted to make sure that if one day you open this page again I would have been part of all the people who want to congratulate you.

So good job, I hope you are fine, and thanks again.

damn this story is deep. loove it

This story is brilliant. Im sad to see it has been incomplete for years. Hope things are well with you.

I'm sad this story died.

I do hope you complete this story !

It is to amazing not too !

I hope you continue this story!

I stopped reading fanfiction about seven years ago, but this is the only story I come back to every year or so with the hope that it might be added to.

I hope you are okay and I hope that in time we might all be able to read this wonderful story in its completion.

Best wishes and divine inspiration.