Reviews for The Perfect Pet
Guest chapter 1 . 9/5/2015
Shino needs to take responsibility for his pets. He should provide Kiba with some dog identification that includes information about what house the pet should be returned to if lost and other information like what model and color Shino's vehicle is in case he has to be located. Do not be surprised if Kiba gets dognapped and shipped to stay on Hufflepuff Drive.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/27/2015
Shino just wants control.
Guest chapter 13 . 4/10/2015
""...I love you... Kiba Inuzuka." Shino whispered silently to himself." Kiba and Shino are teammates and mates. Check.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/10/2015
"Kiba's upset because he has to wear a flea collar." Kiba and Shino are mates.
Refrigerator-Burn chapter 14 . 2/26/2014
i think the spacing was fine. worked well to show how frantic he was at the end and the toll the events took on him at the beginning. the ending seemed a touch over dramatic? after all shino's character isnt one i'd think of to go into a thoughtless panic and charge around blindly. but he is going through a lot.
Guest chapter 14 . 2/3/2013
good, but you keep switching from 1st person POV to third.
marshmallowgilbird chapter 14 . 11/17/2012
pelase continue soon!
Vasto chapter 4 . 11/16/2012
NOW ... i feel weirded ... why did i read it and WHY WILL I CONTINUE :O because its hot -.- and fucking sexy
Vasto chapter 3 . 11/16/2012
what happened with shino and shibi -.- and i still cant believe im reading it
Vasto chapter 2 . 11/16/2012
incest? why am i reading this? ...and why am i reading yaoi o,O

... that all im gonna read sorry:(

... *opening chapter 3*
Vasto chapter 1 . 11/16/2012
as an hetero i don't even know why i read this haha but its good keep on the good work
KatherineDarkQueenRiddle666 chapter 13 . 10/2/2012
I loved it can you please update more
Tren Rogue chapter 2 . 9/21/2012
Well... that wasn't awkward at all... XD
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