Reviews for Etched in Wood
Silvara chapter 2 . 12/29/2012
That was sweet. More than decently written, too.
Koren Steen chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
It seems like Muta's death might be a subtle tribute to the late Peter Boyle.

Oh and I've never read a crossover fic of the Cat Returns with Toy Story. It worked pretty well!
inujisan chapter 2 . 5/23/2012
This...was beautiful. I didn't think you'd update, but you it was beautiful
inujisan chapter 2 . 5/23/2012
This...was beautiful. I didn't think you'd update, but you it was beautiful
hearts a heavy burden x chapter 2 . 1/7/2012
a great ending!
hearts a heavy burden x chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
amazing crossover.

poor baron.

i will definately read on. :) and you even mentioned totoro!
TwilightSky15 chapter 2 . 12/23/2011
Anyway, I was about to rewrite everything, but I had Science Olympiad to worry about. It's a National science competition where you test in different events. There are 24 event and each fall into the three catagories :

building (you build something and test it at the competition, ex: bottle rockets, towers, trebuchet)

test (college level tests on species identification or just facts, ex: Ornithology, Meteorology, Fossils)

lab (a mix of tests and building, you have to create something/do an experiment and answer questions, ex: experimental design, shock value, optics, junkyard challenge)

I had Ornithology, Microbe Mission (test), Ecology (test), Experimental Design, and Bottle Rockets. And at the state competition, where you compete with the best schools in the state, I got first place in Experimental Design! All those hours of work and studying paid off. And now I have a shiny gold medal hanging in my room, along with my other medals from last year and the regional competition this year.

My best friend is in that! XD

Haru laughed and followed the surprisingly agile girl through the hallways. Somehow, this reminded her of the chase Muta had sent her on through the alleyways, so many years ago. Her heart ached of the memories she had with her friends. Too bad the bureau had broken up years ago.

the names Haru and Machida diden't click in my mind until I read this sentnce! XD

this was amazeing! I loved it!
TwilightSky15 chapter 1 . 12/23/2011
He immediately laid his eyes on Totoro who was currently engaged in a dance around a house plant with the LGMs, which included each of them holding a leaf. Baron snickered at this comedic sight, "Is it just me or does that grey, fluffy monster look familiar?"

of course it does! its a thing from a Japanese anime! XD
PrayerGirl chapter 2 . 9/17/2011
This was fantastic!
Prats 'R' Us chapter 2 . 6/21/2011
This was really sweet! Great work
Midnight the Black Fox chapter 2 . 5/6/2011
Sorry to hear about your computer and everything that you lost on it.

On a happier note though congrats for getting first place it must feel nice to win and know that you've earned it XD

I don't know how you can do so much reaserch and stuff, but then again I'm lasy lol great job anyways XD

The story was amazing by the way I loved it but I had a sad feeling at the end because I could imagine Haru becoming a very good friend to everyone and visits and babysits Bonnie frequently but then one day she'd die from something and everyone would be sad and Baron would be standing at the window waiting and knowing that she'll never come back. Depressing I know but I was put in a depressing mood by my art teacher who has a sister who's had two miscarges and her boss is trying to scare her into quiting cause she's the head of litricy in a primary school so yeah. But I now really want to yell at the lady who's putting my art teacher's sister in such an awful state not to mention she was also seriously ill before coming back to work only weeks ago.

Again great work and thanks for the cookie XD
Midnight the Black Fox chapter 1 . 12/23/2010
i acutally read this story becasue i was wondering if anyone came up with the idea of putting The Cat Returns in the same story as Toy Story. I'd watched The Cat Returns a few days ago and thought of the idea seconds before reading this story I must say I was suprised to only find 1 story in this section i thought there would have been more oh well. This was a great story and is that really what happened to Bo? I mean i knew she was sold but i'm not sure about the breaking? Again great story I loved it, i could also picture a sequel to this the i'd have no clue for the plot lol. Great Job XD
luthien-yavetil chapter 1 . 11/19/2010
This is the first time I reviewed a fanfic in YEARS!

I actually found this fic quite excellent - AND I LOVE THE LAST LINE, MIND YOU LAST REVIEWER. &laughs& Sure, there were a little Grammar ups-and-downs, but hey, this is fanfiction! And what I liked about this story is that, despite it being fanfiction, you still managed to put in such colorful descriptions. It was like I was watching a movie of your story in my head! Nice work. :D
Silvara chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
Is Baron a china doll? I thought he randomly thought he was made of wood given all the dangers he takes part in without breaking. xD

I loved the whole story, the characterization, and the cross over is not bad (but I don't know much about cross-fics, so I can't really tell). I was sooo expecting people to cross Cat Returns with Toy story, that I was really disappointed to find almost none. But the surroundings and quality of this one makes up to it enough, I say! :D (I'd so dream about a cross-over with Alice in Wonderland or one with the Little Prince...)

I liked everything and have no read complain beside the last lame line. Ahem, I know, I'm mean. Okay, I take it back. It was not so much bad, but it definitely could do without it.

Such reference in such context would have gone so much better if implied. References are so much interesting when they are allusive... That's almost part of their purpose in my opinion; winks are only destined for the readers able to recognize them. The readers that don't won't be care for it at all, anyway. So keep it subtle; intimate; playful. ;)

Thank you for this sweet and genuine craft.

XxXBuri-ChanXxX chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
very nice :) ive never really thought of this kind of crossover though XD can i have a waffle and a hug? lol anyway, you wrote this quite nicely, and i really enjoyed it :)