Reviews for Within
MilleniaMaster chapter 1 . 11/24/2011
Hey, mystic waters123, I just read you're story, and I gotta say I liked it a lot!

Articuno was the first legendary pokemon I ever cuaght, and it's also my favorite. I thought this peice was pretty cool, cosidering that this is the first pokemon story I've ever read. After you''re story I started to like the pairing of Articuno/Lugia.

You should so write a sequel to this! It's awesome!
dragonsofthe8elements chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
you should write a sequil to this
ms.Clair K Ookami chapter 1 . 4/12/2011
1st pokemon story I have ever read. Not bad, I need to get into pokemon soon.
SolarCarol chapter 1 . 10/9/2010
Aw, how sweet!
ImperfectLuck chapter 1 . 7/14/2010
Pretty nice story. Watch the word usage and tense, though.