|Reviews for Tulip|
| Julien chapter 1 . 11/7/2014
Great FF 3 Hope too see more
| Monsieur Niel chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
Quite good story, but it lacks in dialogue.
Perhaps, if you add some more dialogue, it can strengthen the character of each person in the story...
And maybe, you can lengthen the story.
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/4/2011
It's very good though.
You portraied the sadness that Lyra felt really well.
| mangaluva chapter 1 . 8/27/2010
Well, you asked me to read some of your stories, and I have, so consider this a group review for them all ;)
I really like the subject matter; it's sweet and sad and well-handled. The characters are very real, which can be tough to do with videogame avatars. You come up with good stories.
My main issue is with grammar issues, but they're far from the worst i've seen and only natural considering you're not a native english speaker. There are only minor problems with syntax, and that's really just the kind of thing that you can fix by reading a lot written in english (proper english; you wouldn't believe how badly some native speakers can mangle the language XP) and getting used to the language's slightly odd grammar structure XD
Overall, I like the stories, you just need to keep writing to practice. Practice makes perfect! ;)
| doggiefan chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
It's both adorable and sad at the same time!
| aestheticisms chapter 1 . 7/19/2010
Aww, this was sad, but romantic.
Poor Lyra and Ethan! D:
...now I know what not do when catching Lugia...
Great job, as always! Just a bit more practice with your grammar, and you'll be set~ :D
| WonderHeroe chapter 1 . 7/16/2010
Wow, that was deep. I feel bad for Lyra, blaming herself for Ethan's death. Poor Lyra!
Great story though! It would awesome if you made a prequel! Showing what lead up to the event, and then some! *