Reviews for Finding Life Outside the Kingdom of Heaven
FurrBallXXL chapter 2 . 1/26
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FurrBallXXL chapter 1 . 1/26
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mishalina chapter 2 . 7/22/2010
haha, of course you would do it on Kingdom of Heaven :D It is a really good movie.

So far your story seems very interesting! :D

I haven't found very many mistakes expect for the odd place where a comma should be inserted (Rebekah often forgets commas, too), so in that way it's really good as well.

Overall, nice job so far! :)