|Reviews for Finding Life Outside the Kingdom of Heaven|
| MrsJohnnyDepp Jack Sparrow chapter 19 . 4/25/2013
| mishalina chapter 2 . 7/22/2010
haha, of course you would do it on Kingdom of Heaven :D It is a really good movie.
So far your story seems very interesting! :D
I haven't found very many mistakes expect for the odd place where a comma should be inserted (Rebekah often forgets commas, too), so in that way it's really good as well.
Overall, nice job so far! :)