Im rewatching the series and searched through my old favorite fics to find this one. The humor is spot on

Ed wanting to lick all of Mustangs pens, the detail about his automail arm denting wood, Al glaring at Mustang giving Ed a new mission, Riza only shooting Mustang in the leg

Its amazing!

Great story! Thank you for writing it.

Great story! Thank you for writing it.

My favourite fma fic. Thank you :)

Thank you! I enjoyed this!

"he felt like he'd been knocking on death's door and had only escaped because no one had been home" is SUCH a raw line and i love it-i've thoroughly enjoyed most of this fic but i needed to point out this line in particular

What a way to end the night! I'm so glad I stayed up for this! 3 I especially loved how you handled Leon, and Coronel Mustang at the end! Absolute masterpiece!

Wow, wow, WOW!

What an amazing story! I’m so sad it’s over, but sooooo glad I read it. Author, FANTASTIC work! You put in such time an effort, and it clearly shows here. Be so proud of yourself and the incredible tale you’ve given to Ed and the gang!

Utterly fantastic. Everything couldn’t have been more perfect. Thanks author.

I loved this! I loved how plotty it was, but also how heartbreaking it was at times. I like how you showed how isolating Ed's lack of trust is, but also how relatable and understandable it is considering what he's been through. Thank you for writing this!

Another amazing work you've created! Your writing style always pulls me in right next to the characters and the way you tell your stories just imprints them in my mind. You have such a talent for story-telling and writing

This story was meticulously written and sweet. Thank you

Every single time I read this chapter, I remember why I hate samantha. She pisses me off so badly cause Leon is a criminal! She was assisting a criminal! Ugh! Can't stand her

I forgot to mention - some of the parts of this story are especially heart-breaking
Ed asking Al for his arm back was emotionally devastating
And so was Ed being okay with Al taking his arm and his leg so long as he stayed with him
Absolutely loved this!

The way you conveyed the slow deterioration of Ed's health and his slow understanding of his trust in others was great!
And the part when Ed was incredibly sick and told Walter and everyone else around him all about his past was so sad to read - and seeing how distraught Al was was awful!
I absolutely loved reading this!