Reviews for Transient
UP2L8 chapter 16 . 2/21
I know it's been quite a while since you wrote this, but last night I couldn't sleep. found it (by accident, actually) and read it through. It was thoroughly enjoyable. Nice work on an entertaining read, and thanks for giving me something to do besides lie in bed staring at the ceiling all night.
TheHaloFreak chapter 16 . 1/13
Loved this so much! Poor sick baby Ed! The light novel Under The Far Away Sky has kind of a similar idea, as in Ed gets sick in a backwater town, but he was considerably less sick in that and I think I like yours better :)
JelliesTheFish chapter 16 . 11/7/2014
This was beautiful and so much fun to read! I sometimes felt Ed was a little OOC, but that's my only negative comment. You've written a story that's both wide and deep and has so much hidden behind the scenes it's very impressive. I loved it!
UglyDuckling101 chapter 16 . 11/2/2014
Your writing is beautiful and fluent. The plot was amazing well written. I hope to see more FMA in the future from you!
xxxMishaxxx chapter 16 . 10/13/2014
Great story, wonderful characterization, and after reading that last scene with Ed and Mustang I just can't get this wide, goofy grin off my face :D
Both parts of the story - the rogue alchemist and Ed's 'cold' - were done justice, the characters were very well-written, very..in-character, and even your OC's were awesome. All in all, I could just see this happening in the manga, pre-series.
Cannot thank you enough for this last chapter though. Awesome end to a wonderful story!
ShrimpyJess97 chapter 16 . 8/7/2014
This was so freaking adorable, especially that ending. Thanks for writing this! :)
morghan chapter 16 . 7/4/2014
So after much thinking and rereading the last bits of this final beautiful chapter...I realized. Ed put Mustang as his legal guardian...
random human chapter 1 . 5/11/2014
Dude, this is seriously the best fma fanficition ever written, you really kept all the carachters in carachter and created a really cool story that seemed likely to happen in the actual series. Please post more fma fanfics!
klingpling chapter 16 . 5/7/2014
Great writing! This story could be a piece in the manga. Your writing show understanding of the characters, I loved reading it! Hope you will write more stories about Fullmetal Alchemist.
TheColdfireAlchemist chapter 16 . 4/21/2014
Great story!
MemoriesOfVoxei chapter 16 . 2/3/2014
THAT WAS SO AWESOME! SO MANY EMOTIONS! I like sick!Ed so much! And Parental!RoyEd too! This was a really good fic! I enjoyed reading it very much, I swear!

I want to thank you for having taken some of your time to write this story for all of us. I'm sincerly grateful for that.

With love and admiration for your hard work,
MemoriesOfVoxei
The Grey Fox chapter 15 . 1/19/2014
Too lazy to log in...
"... but in the middle of that masterpiece it looked like some violent deity of anger and destruction had descended from on high and smote the property."
"More importantly, he wondered how many other people had earned his trust while he hadn't been paying attention."
Pure genius. Absolute, pure genius. And the rest of the story was also awesome. There's a few spelling and punctuation errors here and there, but who really cares about that? The most important (in my mind) is grammar. Your grammar is impeccable, and that is just... extremely awesome. To me, one could have the best story in the world, but if it is told with improper language, it really doesn't matter in the least. Bad grammar severely deducts from any writing and easily turns outstanding literature into literature I can't stand. I... simply cannot express how... absolutely wonderful it is to read something written by one who understands basic English... Oh god, I do believe I'm tearing up...
It was all awesome. Quite frankly, this was a pleasure to read, and I am very glad I found this story! Very well done!
I shall now give into my fangirl instincts.
*deep breath*
OMFG SO AAAWESOOOOME! Poor Edo-kun X3
Mkay, I'm done. I apologize for the absurd length of this comment. Keep being awesome! D
X Miyuki-chan X chapter 16 . 11/24/2013
I loved that story. They were so in character, and it was so descriptive. Good job!
AspergianStoryteller chapter 8 . 10/13/2013
The dialogue and everything else flows well, with neither too much or too little. Do you write professionaly?
AspergianStoryteller chapter 4 . 10/12/2013
Ah, alcohol. I thought there was milk in the tea, disguised by spice.
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