|Reviews for What Happens in the Hole, Stays in the Hole|
| AuraFelix chapter 1 . 9/22/2013
Wow, this was so cute ! You really shouldn't fix the ending, I think it's amazing ! Really good job, just what I was looking for :)
| Aki Hideyoshi chapter 1 . 8/25/2013
I liked it! It was always my dream to be togetter with Kojiro, back when I was a kid watching Pokemon. XD I had (and still has) such a big crush on him. I was gay even back then... aw... memories.
Anyway! I enjoyed this a lot! Well writen and really sexy! _
| puffin chapter 1 . 8/14/2013
I loved it. It was a great one-shot.
| Cedes1002 chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
Ur Gud this you should make more
| MOVEDTOANOTHER chapter 1 . 2/16/2013
I gotta say one thing and then i will let it drop Misty was the dumbest abusive bitch ever in the Pokemon series *frowns* I hated her when she hits anyone with that fan. Poor Ash and Brock who had to deal with her *sighs* Otherwise it was cute story.
| IchigoPudding chapter 1 . 10/24/2012
When your Growlithe looks like a Magicarp, akkwwarrddd :P
Hehe cute! xxx
| dear god yes chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
Overall I enjoyed this. The pacing was really well done considering this was a first attempt, and it still brought that yaoi flare that I enjoy. A lot of the time I've seen people pairing themselves with in their otp, and end up writing sub-par to horrid stories that both nauseate and confuse the hell out of me. With this, I could appreciate the taboo aspect of the pairing considering how great of enemies they were in the series, giving off that "forbidden fruit" sort of feeling that I've come to enjoy while reading. If I were to be picky, I'd say there were some grammar issues like punctuation and typos. Next time just double check your work twice over I guess. But again, I loved this )
| Montague chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
OH MY GOD TAHT IS THA HOTTEST THING EVAR, LIKE HOTTAR THAN A MOTHAFUCKA
| Mika-Chan1496 chapter 1 . 8/21/2012
I thought is was well written and sweet.
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
Eww, this freaking sucks ASS. I should've never wrote this garbage. Nobody really likes this. I'm ashamed of myself…
NOW SAY THIS TO YOURSELF ON OPPOSITE DAY!
| Sambart chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
Ooo I liked it!
You did VERY well with the description to say you weren't very good at it, but that's your words not mine! xDD
| KageNekoReborn chapter 1 . 12/9/2011
| Failisse chapter 1 . 12/1/2011
Holy shit that was hot! I absolutely loved it! Please, please, please make more like this with the Kojiro/Satoshi pairing. I would totally pass my finals if you wrote a sexy sequel to this one! Gah, but I love this! It's definitely going on my list of favorites.
Great job with the characterization and all. You kept them all in-character, which is not an easy thing to do. The plot itself may have been a little cliche, but you totally made it work. I am super lucky to have stumbled onto this fic. Thank you for this wonderful contribution to the community.
| bnvbnv27 chapter 1 . 8/9/2011
I love this story, I like the Ash/James thing theres not enough fanfics like this. I wrote an Ash/James fanfic too called Not Worth It, check it out. :D
| undeaddade chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
There are lemons for Dora The Explorer somewhere, its not like you wrote motherxson. However... pokemonxhuman is has a human shaped egg type as well as Eevee. You green or red now?