Reviews for As Children After Play
teerandom chapter 18 . 2/11
I was with you until the baby surprise. The rest of the story doesn’t make sense to me now lol why would she leave her child? It’s like she completely forgot about him until that voicemail? I can’t.
Ticcing Bat chapter 45 . 12/14/2024
they both call their baby their daughter. i hate how you xall it fetus
drboggs chapter 42 . 11/27/2024
It's not the absence of love, it's the presence of mercy. So lovely. You're so good!
zenmasterlover chapter 16 . 5/6/2024
This version of edward is so hot omg
zenmasterlover chapter 5 . 5/6/2024
Just started this today and it is fantastic! Its so cute that you call your readers “duckies” as well!
Neapinea chapter 50 . 4/9/2024
Favorite fanfic I’ve read so far!
TheStrangeNessie chapter 1 . 12/31/2022
This is a feminazi’s wet dream. Over exaggerates on women’s troubles while belittling men’s. this author is a disgusting piece of shit.
TheStrangeNessie chapter 3 . 12/31/2022
Really? The whole “woman’s pain is so much worse then mans” bullshit. If you actually think that you should be institutionalize.
kneon chapter 50 . 12/9/2022
Great story. Thank you for sharing
Guest chapter 36 . 10/22/2022
I’m sorry ,but Bella is such a selfish and demanding girl. She doesn’t appreciate anything.I don’t understand why everyone thinks she is so wonderful. It’s kind of hard to believe.
Camila0803 chapter 50 . 8/4/2022
Loved
MyladyNancy chapter 50 . 7/5/2022
I loved your story
MyladyNancy chapter 26 . 7/2/2022
good for rose
MyladyNancy chapter 6 . 6/30/2022
oh my I loved this chapter. I could see Charlies struggling to find his feet. and Bella's confusion. and Edwards power
RosemaryElizabeth chapter 1 . 3/25/2022
Oohh, interesting!
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