Reviews for As Children After Play |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I was with you until the baby surprise. The rest of the story doesn’t make sense to me now lol why would she leave her child? It’s like she completely forgot about him until that voicemail? I can’t. |
![]() ![]() ![]() they both call their baby their daughter. i hate how you xall it fetus |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's not the absence of love, it's the presence of mercy. So lovely. You're so good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This version of edward is so hot omg |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just started this today and it is fantastic! Its so cute that you call your readers “duckies” as well! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Favorite fanfic I’ve read so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a feminazi’s wet dream. Over exaggerates on women’s troubles while belittling men’s. this author is a disgusting piece of shit. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really? The whole “woman’s pain is so much worse then mans” bullshit. If you actually think that you should be institutionalize. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. Thank you for sharing |
![]() ![]() I’m sorry ,but Bella is such a selfish and demanding girl. She doesn’t appreciate anything.I don’t understand why everyone thinks she is so wonderful. It’s kind of hard to believe. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved your story |
![]() ![]() ![]() good for rose |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my I loved this chapter. I could see Charlies struggling to find his feet. and Bella's confusion. and Edwards power |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oohh, interesting! |