Reviews for As Children After Play
Mango-Live chapter 32 . 11/4/2011
I would like to thank you for this story and your amazing writing. It view on abuse and the CPS system is profound and probably eye opening for a lot of people. Now on to the geeky fan-fiction loving side of my personality... PLEASE CONTINUE AND UPDATE SOON. I am sure you get tons of these requests but I have pretty much been reading this story straight through, only stoping to eat, use the bathroom and when I am forced to attend class (college is over-rated by the way), I am truly enthralled with it and I am very much looking for a conclusion to the madness.

Currently being forced to go to my work study job,

Rashida Jewel
mountainlion718 chapter 32 . 11/2/2011
and she's gonna have to face all the consequences when she goes back to the states
mountainlion718 chapter 31 . 11/2/2011
whew...they still have a long road, but they'll do it together
mountainlion718 chapter 30 . 11/2/2011
that's gonna be an interesting chapter...
mountainlion718 chapter 29 . 11/2/2011
oh no way! Edward's really gonna freak now
mountainlion718 chapter 26 . 11/1/2011
this is breaking my heart...it kills me when B & E are at odds and they might never truly be together
mountainlion718 chapter 25 . 11/1/2011
i hope Charlie doesn't have a leg to stand on...What's Edward gonna say to Bella...?
mountainlion718 chapter 24 . 11/1/2011
How did she leave without him knowing? Is that why she was so scared? Cause she planned on leaving
mountainlion718 chapter 22 . 11/1/2011
Oops, I think he screwed up...
mountainlion718 chapter 19 . 10/31/2011
Omg, Jacob is so stupid...pisses me off...I hope Bella's plan works
mountainlion718 chapter 18 . 10/31/2011
If Edward doesn't kill him, the rest of the family will...
mountainlion718 chapter 17 . 10/31/2011
Edward is going to commit murder...thats what...
mountainlion718 chapter 16 . 10/31/2011
Good gifts...I hope she can accept them fully soon
mountainlion718 chapter 14 . 10/31/2011
Oh no, Edward is gonna beat himself up about this...
mountainlion718 chapter 13 . 10/31/2011
And if he would have started purring, I think I would have passed out...lol
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