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this chapter is the best! I love the way you get into Bella's head, and drop lots of hints about who she's protecting. so good!

Awesome story!

ohhh her parents are dicks...boo hoo...I don't trust people...boo hoo...no one is ever nice to me...ya right...bellas just a whiny bitch

Bellas character is vunerable enough without abuse isn't it? This story seems redundant. And who in the actual fuck wants a rose pov? DUMB DA DUMB DUMB

Great writing!

I'm very impressed with your first Twific. I did have difficulty reading descriptions of Charlie hurting Bella. Being a guy, I felt very protective of her. I wanted to rip him limb from limb. Slowly. It's impossible for me to understand how he could treat his own flesh and blood like that. I would have made him disappear very early on.

Thank you for entertaining me!

Alice is beyond irritating. It feels like a blatant disregard for others feeling- constantly. I get she's bubbly and happy and has energy to spare but sometimes calm is what Bella needs. Not to be a Barbie doll. How can she be considered a best friend when she doesn't respect Bella's feelings is beyond me.

Love it

esme went to mount holyoke?! I go to mount holyoke! i think i squealed a bit when i read that

Just re read... its an epic story...hard to review it seems I re viewed a lot first time round..,

so good.

This was such an amazing story. I loved that the characters were beautiful and broken yet managed to find their path. And a HEA after all the struggle never hurts. Thank you for writing and sharing this fic.

I enjoyed this story very much. I adored your versions of Esme and Rosalie the most, as they are my favorites and their bonds with Bella. Esme was the best Mother that Bella could ever have, and Rosalie a caring, no nonsense, kick-ass big sister.

Charlie was a giant, vile, piece of shit, and I was ready for him to die when he was first introduced. The man should never have been allowed near a child, and neither should Renee. Poor Bella was screwed from the start with parents like that.

I despised Jacob, Billy, and the tribe because as sickening as it is, there are people out the who actually think like they do, and do nothing,even though they know the truth. I'm glad that in the end, Charlie, Jacob, Billy, and Frank all got what they deserved in the end.

I thought Bella giving Rosalie and Emmett Mason was the best thing she could do for everyone involved. Rosalie and Emmett were amazing parents to that boy. Loved Bella naming Ellie after Esme. I always hated how they never gave Nessie a real childhood by aging her so quickly in the books, so I liked your twist of making her age slowly.

Wasn't a fan of the lemons, just a personal choice, or that Carlisle was a little to wishy washy at times, like allowing Bella to go home when he knew what would likely happen when she did. Freedom to choose is great, but not when he knowingly put her life and health at risk by returning her.

This was a great story that hit all the raw and emotional beats. Great job and thank you for sharing it with us.

Thank you for writing such a great story! Loved it!