Reviews for As Children After Play |
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![]() ![]() ![]() oh wow this poor girl i fill for her sorry but this story seems so life like that you or someone you know has gone thought it al (mines the vampires but the rest) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank goodness we won't have to wait long for the next update...I don't think I could take the suspense for that long! Great job...as always! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Bella. If they can't get Charloe legally perhaps he could have an 'accident'.Update soon story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love to see them getting closer, and the family talking about that bond and what it means. I liked Rosalie in this chapter. EvilRenee makes an appearance! Yay! I mean, I feel sorry for Bella, but I love me some Evil, or a least neglectful, Renee! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So beautiful! Thanks for posting. I feel I am missing something with the Carlisle/Renee interaction though... Im not sure what he was looking for or what Renee wasnt telling him. Im loving this story and look forward to next time you are able to post :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I stumbled across your story a week or so ago ... very interested to see where it all goes! Complements as well to your nice writing style and good editing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww a wonderfully fluffy chapter! Can't wait for the kissing! Good luck with your thesis stuff :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Bella. I hope Edward can keep her away from Charlie. Renee is a selfish bitch. I do hope Bella has not suffered sexual abuse from Charlie's 'friends'. Update soon please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww...Edward is amazing! I heart him...and poor Bella...great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() great chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another wonderful chapter, with some beautiful Edward and Bella ineraction. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow this is good cant wait for more :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() heartbreaking... please right more soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like |