| Reviews for As Children After Play |
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   bcullen1026 chapter 4 . 8/6/2010 Wow...poor Bells. And I have to say I really like Rose in this story. You are doing a really good job and I can't wait to read more! Thanks! |
| ms-author-aka Krystal chapter 3 . 8/5/2010 man... rose is a really cool charecter. i have alwaysliked her in the books. even when she acted a little(or a lot)bitchy. but the big sister role fits her the best. she just seemes that type of person to me. |
| ms-author-aka Krystal chapter 2 . 8/5/2010 another great chapter. i like the fact that you change to point of view. |
| ms-author-aka Krystal chapter 1 . 8/5/2010 geat chapter. i've just starteded getting into evil charlie stories and it would be great if you could recommend some. |
| MoneyTunes10 chapter 4 . 8/5/2010 I love love love your style of writing and I can't wait to see where you go with this story :) Keep up the good work...I'm hooked! |
| His Gem chapter 4 . 8/4/2010 wonderful writing, i cant wait til you update! |
| Cazimodo chapter 4 . 8/4/2010 hey your story is really well written and way way better then lots of the other stories i've read like this :) thanks for the awesome story :) |
| bcullen1026 chapter 3 . 7/30/2010 I really like this story! You are an amazing writer. And I do believe the title of your story comes from the poem Tomlinson by Kipling...if I am not mistaken. Great job and I can't wait for more! |
| Lazielow chapter 2 . 7/17/2010 I'm looking forward to seeing more Rosalie/Bella interaction. I can't wait for the next update. |