|Reviews for As Children After Play|
| mommymac0508 chapter 50 . 3/8
I loved it so perfect thank you
| Guest chapter 26 . 3/6
Rosalie is a third-class bitch - not worthy of second- or first-class. Based on the summary, I was excited about liking a Rosalie character. But she's truly horrible.
It's been pushed too far with Bella. She's no longer a character to feel sympathy or empathy for. Regardless of the truly horrific things that have happened to her, her "confusion" is tiresome.
I like your writing style, but the characters are now frustrating me in a way that I no longer care what happens to them. I'm sorry.
Even though I realize the story is no longer the right one for me, thank you so much for putting yourself out there and sharing your writing talent with us.
| ohtobeyoung chapter 50 . 3/8
I'm going about this the wrong way but I read this amazing story in the last two days. Absolutely loved it. So many emotions running through now, heart racing. Loved how she took care of Frank. Seems everyone gets what they deserve. I agree Jacob doesn't deserve any happiness. Not sure if this has surpassed Wisp as a favorite. Would love Ellie's future. Was happy to see Rose as a big sister. I've worked in special ed and have seen so many who don't want to get involved and turn a blind eye so they didn't need to get involved. Apathy is a horrible thing. My heart goes out to you as you struggle with many things. Thank you for putting your heart in your writing. Struggling with many health issues, I know mental health can be much harder. It took many years and two brain bleeds before I finally got some assistance. Virtual hugs.
| Guest chapter 23 . 3/6
The melodrama hit the ceiling in this one.
| Guest chapter 21 . 3/6
With the exception of Edward, the Cullen family has finally gotten on my last nerve. They are immensely annoying. They are know-it-alls wrapped in syrupy concern. And Rosalie seems to be quickly shedding her "big sister" Bella concern for a selfish "Mason is mine" not-the-real-mom but thinks-she-is-the-mom person. She's only getting to do this thanks to Bella. But Bella is collateral damage now, eh?
| Guest chapter 16 . 3/6
I understand some of the reasons and concern. Perhaps you are using it as a sense of foreboding that he will eventually screw up big. However, all of the doubts about Edward (regarding Bella), especially from Rosalie and Esme are getting really tiresome. They are constant and harping, regardless of their pasts. It's gotten to the point of outright annoying, which I hate because I like the overall story.
| Guest chapter 50 . 3/6
Outstanding story, thank you for taking the time to write and share your talent with us.
| IAmMelissa2 chapter 36 . 3/7
I didn't even think about Charlie feeling "ownership" because of child support. But to a certain degree, I can just imagine a truly horrible using that as an excuse in his mind - justification. I've been a child in the middle of divorce issues - not even close to such an extreme as Bella's. It is amazing how resentful men can be about having to pay child support. It seems like there is a disconnect if the child isn't living with the father and he has to pay money. Usually it seems like it's the opposite from the possession angle. Like the child is no longer his since he/she isn't living with him and why should he have to pay money. Charlie seems to be going both routes possession and resentment. I know some people are just evil, but, in your mind, was there a particular catalyst for Charlie's disgusting behavior? Maybe you tell us later on. But it's not just two-year-olds that want to know why? Why? Why? Why? :-)
| mcamastow chapter 50 . 3/7
It is so nice to see that you compieted this story even after everthing that was going on in your life just want to say thank you .
| CSG chapter 50 . 3/7
It took me a while to get through this one. I just took my time with it & read it inbetween others. That doesnt mean it wasnt good because it was. I really enjoyed alot. I thought you did an excellent job. Its very well written as well. The story line was unique & you filled in all the gaps. Thank you for sharing it! :)
| Guest chapter 41 . 3/4
Why do I get the feeling that Charlie isn't
going to make it to trial? The man is gonna
be volatile and unpredictable ... and he's
going to die by Edward's hand.
| Fleur50 chapter 50 . 3/6
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| Fleur50 chapter 48 . 3/6
Wow, quelle belle histoire! Vous êtes un auteur que j'aime beaucoup.
| Fleur50 chapter 47 . 3/6