Reviews for While You Were Gone
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 9 . 10/19/2013
great now they are husband and wife that is so great now for the party and food and dancing
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 8 . 10/19/2013
ok now lets hope they really do get a little boy that looks just like Edward cause Jakes her brother and cant imprint on their daughter so that's great and maybe now Rose wnt hate her so much og god she might hate her more now that she can have a baby and she cant
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 7 . 10/18/2013
so they are getting married june 19th or the 20th witch is it I forgot
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 6 . 10/18/2013
what the hell is Rose's problem it is not like she is turning into a vampire so what
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 5 . 10/18/2013
well might as well go to his house if he grounds her it will just happen later rater than sooner
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 4 . 10/18/2013
he shot Edward god I bet that went over big
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 3 . 10/18/2013
yes if they keep tearing each others clothes off pretty soon they wont have any left but Alice does like to shop[snicker]
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 1 . 10/18/2013
That was so cute and guess what they aren't virgins anymore. now they better get her some clothes does he need pants
Joda-Eragonsson chapter 15 . 10/14/2013
Great story, seeing as this was last updated in 2011, I'm going to take a wild guess and say that part 2 isn't actually going to happen. That is really unfortunate, I know how good it would have been
JackieJay chapter 15 . 9/30/2013
When are you going to update the story?
LionP Raaawwwrr chapter 15 . 8/27/2013
OMG! I cant believe you've left it there and put it as complete. I'm dying here wanting to know what's going to happen next. U.U I love this story and base on this you are amazing writer and the way you express your characters captures me and keeps me reading on. Caleb I thought is incredibly adorable, and I wish that you will come back to this fanfiction and give it a real ending instead of in the middle of the fight scene. x
wowy chapter 15 . 8/17/2013
Omg that was awesome is there a sequel caus i want to know y the volturi are there. Love the plot line
polyphany chapter 15 . 8/14/2013
Great story! I love it!
BelMayer chapter 15 . 8/5/2013
When are we going to see the part 2? Leave it in suspense like this... you are cruel. Just kidding. Congrats on the story btw.
jdc0630 chapter 15 . 7/30/2013
OK...I say's it's 'Complete'...but how could you just end it the way you did?
There was so much going on...more newborns, the Volturi, Caleb exposed to the Volturi,
where the Hell is Bella & Jacob, & what does Edward mean they are here for our help?

I looked for a sequel, but nothing is posted. Surely your not going to leave me hanging
with so much still to happen.

I hope you will let me know what your plans are...

Thank you for sharing your story with me.

Jamie Crabtree (Messenger)
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