Reviews for Crush
sarahjane82 chapter 1 . 7/3/2015
Bless I always thought there was something there between theses two. They make such a cute couple.
AnaxshiNearXVIAni-Nyu chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
Vivien G chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
Amazing work :D It gives that adorable obsession part in a cute relationship/crush you know, not being able to stand being around or stop thinking of that certain someone, poor Donnie and April is all innocent to not know- or does she know -.O.. We'll never know but seriously it couldnt be more obvious besides she's a smart girl ;) I still don't understand why he'd try to hide it, ASK HER OUT MAN XD Incredible work :3 Amazing for a one-shot :3
Its Kare Bear chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
That is a really great story you have here! I really like how vivid your descriptions are of Donnie thinking about April. I'd love to see one on April thinking about Donnie.

Keep up the good work!
Aster Sapphire chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
Sweet Jesus. Poor Donnie...I mean SERIOUSLY poor Donnie. April's pretty much KILLING him and she doesn't even notice. I never really thought much about this side of the attraction Donnie has to April. I always think abouthim simply being in love with her and that alone is hard enough but THIS, ouch. I've said it twice now and dammit I'll say it again, Poor. Donnie.
PenAndInkPrincess chapter 1 . 6/19/2012
That was a perfect combination of cute and awkward and puberty-ish writing. Poor Don. XD I've always wondered if the guys experienced puberty and hormones like normal teenagers. I would think so, because they're human in pretty much every other way (ya know...besides the fact that they're green...and have shells...and...aren't all...but other than that, totally human!).

I also like that you mention that Don is always afraid he's going to hurt her, even when he's just hugging her. Weirdo that I am, I was actually just thinking about what would happen if April (lacking a hard shell to protect her) got thrown about as much as the guys. Not only are they muscley...but she doesn't have a hard shell to protect her squishy insides. It would even be quite easy for one of the guys to easily hurt her by accident.

Great job!
Sillvog chapter 1 . 9/17/2010
This was GREAT! It stands as a one-shot no problem, even though I would love to see another chapter. I'm having way to much fun with the idea of the other guys having the same problem. In fact, I think I'll look at what else you've done to see if you have.
ZathuraRoy chapter 1 . 9/14/2010
this is so sad... poor donny... super well written, but poor donny...
callmeBaby'08 chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
'O' seriously your just gonna stop your story there this was good stuff keep em pun intended
zenonaa chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
This is WONDERFUL. The only bad thing is that this is a one shot. I would love to see this as a chapter story.

Seriously, this is great. Poor Donnie. x'D
Fantasyfan4ever chapter 1 . 7/14/2010
Aww, this is so cute! I can totally imagine Don thinking like this, and you really grasp his character. Great work!
Mikell chapter 1 . 7/14/2010
Oh my good Lord... Poor Donny! I was embarassed FOR him, reading this.

I'm curious, why is it that everyone thinks Raph is the porn collector of the family? Maybe Leo has a secret stash somewhere... ;)

Rejoicing in the day,


PS Yes, I did see a couple of coding things still in there, just in the first few paragraphs though.
Danica Moonstar chapter 1 . 7/14/2010
So this is what don feels when he is around april. I knew he liked her. just watching the cartoons has signs he has got a crush on her.

Love the story.


The title reminds me of a song which is called "Crush" as well.