|Reviews for Mating Imperative|
| winterfae22 chapter 4 . 4/2
Bella is amazing!
| winterfae22 chapter 3 . 4/2
| winterfae22 chapter 2 . 4/2
| winterfae22 chapter 1 . 4/2
| KimiikoUchiha chapter 2 . 2/28
| Rebecca chapter 8 . 2/15
I have read each and every one of your stories and they are all so perfect. I am so upset that they haven't been updated in a long time so update soon and don't give up on these stories
| bebekids5 chapter 8 . 1/26
i love it i have not read a story like this is very good cant wait for you to update it soon so please do
| Amu4ever chapter 1 . 1/14
The flow of the story isn't quite right. Sometimes it seems rushed, sometimes you switch scenes too fast. Hmm...I guess the best way to describe it is that it's as if you are watching a movie and in the middle of one scene it suddenly switches to the next.
Just imagine a girl walking in the park and suddenly something jumps on her, but in the middle of the struggle the scene switches and the girl is safely at home. You would wonder how that happened too, wouldn't you?
Maybe making it a bit more elaborate would help. You do not use many words in your attempts to portray idea...
Oh and interesting story, wonder how lunch will go :D
| Eternalotaku11 chapter 8 . 1/7
Update pleaseeeee I love your story so much
You have a wonderful unique writing style
| Neava Kaeth chapter 8 . 1/2
| My Eyez Are Watching Everyone chapter 8 . 1/2
good, can't wait for more
| KingCrab-5D's-RivalGIII chapter 8 . 12/23/2015
Wow please update soon
| Nellyblue11 chapter 8 . 12/5/2015
Please update your story
| B4bidden.Products chapter 8 . 10/31/2015
Dam. Wish there was more to read right now pls update soon
| twilight-et-the-vampire chapter 8 . 10/20/2015
a bientot pour la suite