Reviews for Enslaved
deanna xxx chapter 5 . 12/10/2012
when will u be updating x
sportytc chapter 5 . 12/3/2012
please can u update and complete this fanfic. i hae read it several times and would love to read more
freethewolves1 chapter 5 . 11/18/2012
great story so far. i really hope you update it soon
killer4853 chapter 2 . 10/29/2012
brutal but a great story update plez
win63 chapter 5 . 10/18/2012
This is such a good story, I hope sometime there will be an update.
Ca.zaphira chapter 5 . 9/11/2012
I have been completely captured by the story you have written so far. Sincerely hope you decide to complete it one of these days.
Italian Mafia chapter 5 . 8/29/2012
Dear ace1014,
I absolutely love your story Enslaved and am litterally jumping up and down in excitement, waiting for your next thrilling chapter!
MCR Killjoys chapter 5 . 8/1/2012
please update soon

Becky xxx
viau1 chapter 5 . 7/26/2012
Are you done with this story? I really hope not. I would love to keep reading it.
Mr. and Ms. Cuddles chapter 5 . 7/16/2012
Lose interest? Die? Honestly, I hope it is the former rather then you being dead or really really hurt. I know real life intervenes at times and sometimes we stop writing, even our best written stories. This is one of your best stories. I have read pretty much every one of your stories, even though they are not complete, and have enjoyed them all. You are great in the technical aspects. You are spectacular in reaching out and grabbing your readers. You are such a great writer that I am always hungry for more of your work. It is just a shame that it has been so long since you have updated. This is not the only site I have read your work from either, just the one I use the most. If nothing else maybe you can find someone who you trust and who writes almost as wonderfully as you do and have them finish. What I would really love though, is if you did it yourself. This story has the makings to be the most reviewed of all Jasper/Bella stories if you continue going with it as you started, strong and interesting. You have such an elegant writing style, more flowery then some but to me it just makes it more vivid to my imagination. I can only guess what poor Bella has been through. I really cannot fight the urge I have to read this story and see it fully formed. Then again I cannot fight that urge on the rest of your stories either.
sherry williams chapter 5 . 6/17/2012
amazing... love it...
sherry williams chapter 4 . 6/17/2012
jasper you dumbass... love it...
sherry williams chapter 3 . 6/17/2012
amazing... love it...
sherry williams chapter 2 . 6/17/2012
damn jasper/the major/god of war is pissed
sherry williams chapter 1 . 6/17/2012
holy shit! edward is an ass (just kidding really love him)... why didnt jacob smell nathaniel?
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