Reviews for Enslaved
ephona chapter 4 . 10/22/2010
love it update soon
mama4dukes chapter 4 . 10/22/2010
I wonder if Bella still remembers Jasper now? I can't wait for the Major to come out and play.
Princess Mishawaka chapter 4 . 10/21/2010
So Bella has been around before? Reincarnation.

I wouldn't want the Major mad at me and Peter is very fortunate that he was able to talk himself out of being pulled apart limb from limb.

Now they will make the evil monsters who hurt Bella pay.

I love Jasper. Bella is so lucky.
reina13 chapter 4 . 10/21/2010
i freaking love it hope you update real soon can not wait for "the MAJOR" to get his hand on the vamps in volterria and the cullans
ankoku696 chapter 4 . 10/21/2010
oooooh jasper is in trouble. what is he gonna do to make it up to her. this is getting really good i cant wait for the next chapter
ILoveMrGeorgeWeasley chapter 4 . 10/21/2010
aww cute
Venetiangrl92 chapter 4 . 10/21/2010
:O! GREAT CHAPTER! please update soon!
charlie2791 chapter 4 . 10/21/2010
confusing but I liked it!
Twilight's Sapphire chapter 4 . 10/21/2010
Terrific chapter!

Thanks and take care
Wolf Baby Hale chapter 4 . 10/21/2010
awesome chapter I can't wait to see what happens next please update again soon.
Plain J chapter 4 . 10/21/2010
This sounds great so far. I love how the Volturi is afraid of our God of War! Can't wait to read more, please update soon!
SassyFrassKerr chapter 4 . 10/21/2010
Interesting twist with the reincarnation.
Twilight Di chapter 4 . 10/21/2010
Sweet Mary, what a chapter! That was awsome, made me cry, so original. Can't wait for more!
JaspersSweetie chapter 4 . 10/21/2010
Loved the chapter, a poignant description of soul mates, and I can't wait to see what happens next.
KareBear1965 chapter 4 . 10/21/2010
awesome chapter keep it coming.

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