Reviews for Enslaved
cathy29jes chapter 8 . 7/5/2015
yess an update, a pleasure to see this story
Edward is not the asshole that think the entire way, it would not have been as serious if he had not played ave Alice and made sure to separate Bella and Jasper, repayment of Major will ensure that neither Alice nor Edward will not be able to forget, the time of their agony will be long but they will beg for death before Jasper and Bella their offer,
excellent chapter,
KEZZ 1 chapter 8 . 7/5/2015
Great chapter :-D
ForrestersWitch chapter 8 . 7/5/2015
cool! just found this one I do so love your machinations
1WhoLoves2ReadAlot chapter 8 . 7/5/2015
Awesome story, so far! Love it! Hope you get a chance to write more soon. I can't wait to read what happens after Bella turns into a vampire.
toomanycats21 chapter 8 . 7/5/2015
glad your back update soon please
tiggerdavis1970 chapter 8 . 7/5/2015
That was amazing! I missed this story! I hope there is another chapter soon! I am so addicted to this! !
Razeus1 chapter 8 . 7/5/2015
I love me a 'Bad-a$$' Jasper!
I Really hate when stories make him wimpy and toothless... 'cause, Oh-My-God(of War) he is the ultimate in dominating male... it's in his DNA!
together25x3 chapter 8 . 7/5/2015
I like this and I can't wait for the next chapter!
fallunder chapter 8 . 7/5/2015
Yay an update. Nice reading.
NicoleR85 chapter 8 . 7/5/2015
Another great chapter. I can't wait to read the next one. Please update soon. I can't wait to read what happens next.
Guest chapter 6 . 6/23/2015
That's so sweet that bella would let marcus be her father.
Guest chapter 4 . 6/23/2015
Wow that is just sad
Guest chapter 7 . 3/26/2015
Well I really enjoyed this story so far it is different and exciting.
I really hope you find the time to finish it!
tiggerdavis1970 chapter 7 . 3/9/2015
I wish this was finished! It is fantastic! I love it!
Destineyofme chapter 5 . 12/13/2014
Please continue to write on this story it is really interesting
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