Reviews for A moments regret
Hawki chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
VERY short, but I'm willing to review it in that context. Anyway, it at least provides a moral viewpoint from Adams's POV, that it's preferable to have the helghast win outright rather than be locked in continuous battle with the UCN, which fits his 'boss fight' comments in the game. Grammar is a bit errornous though-need commas to end dialogue rather than full stops.