|Reviews for Alone In Ba Sing Se|
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/13/2016
this was written terribly
| Mullent169 chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
i loved the story. lol i love these sort of story where it is just a lemon. :D and its even more hotter when they are characters i know and can actually hear their voice in my head when i read them. lol you should totally make some more stories you have the kind of talent in this kind of thing to do so. _
| Mochi no Yume chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
I liked how straight and to the point you were with this! It made it that much hotter!
I think you could try putting a little more detail but that's really up to you :)
It's always nice to have fics like these that get straight to the hotness (I definitely think so)
You should totally write more stories!
And I would love to see you write that George/Max story!
I know you would make it hot!
| AnimeAddict4Life chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
nice wicked cool
| Michael01 chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
it short but I love it