|Reviews for Good Luck Has Its Storms|
| Silverstargirl chapter 21 . 3/2
Beautiful story! I quite enjoyed it. :D
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/28
Yeah, okay, you posted this a long time ago, but I absolutely love you for saving Sirius and Severus.
The story's brilliant.
| Guest chapter 4 . 1/14
Then. Then, then, then. Said then, added then, laughed then. Then, then, then, then, then.
We already presume that things are happening chronologically, in the order that you've written them. You don't need specify that this happened "then", and then that happened "then". It's redundant, and really distracting. I like the story mostly, but I'm sorry to say I'm quitting after chapter 4...
Or should I say, I read then way too many times, and it got frustrating then, and I stopped reading then. I left an uncharacteristically mean review then.
I'm sorry to be so harsh, but hopefully my slightly exaggerated example will ring a bell in your mind next time you're writing, to stop you spoiling your own wonderful story with that one useless word. Banish it from the end of your sentences. I promise you, they will all still make just as much sense to the reader.
| TheLadyJaye chapter 21 . 12/6/2013
That was a delightful story! Thank you so much.
| wdlwbt chapter 21 . 11/18/2013
I really really liked this! Thanks :)
| YamiToMangaka chapter 3 . 8/5/2013
Hello, dear author(ess)!
I know this is kind of sudden, but I really needed to tell you something. You. Are. An. Amazing. Writer. Honestly, I have read this story through at least four-or-so times and even now it captivates me whenever I drag it out from the depths of my favorites list. However, this is the first time I've noticed how much detail and thought you have put into this! I mean, really, I only just noticed this part...- Luna tapped Harriet's nose then Albus's before smiling and nodding to herself. "You must both work very hard to get them together."- You had it all pre-planed! Right from the beginning you KNEW that the two of them would help! YOU ARE AMAZING! ...or I'm just incredibly stupid... the jury is still out on that one... I mean, yeah, I noticed the whole "Storm in a Teacup" thing, but to think that Luna knew from all the back here... O.O - See this? This is what I look like when I've been stunned completely speechless! I have seen many fanfictions that are good, my dear Emmylia, but it is a rare thing to truly capture my attention. So far, I think only five-or-so have, and now I have to make that number a six! So, thank you for writing such an amazing story, and I hope to find the time to look into more of your work soon!
With much love,
| MirrorofFate chapter 21 . 7/10/2013
Beu...beu...beautiful! Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa, i have always loved family fic like this one o
| Guest chapter 21 . 7/8/2013
That was a beautiful ending to a truly amazing story! Be proud of this!
| Guest chapter 21 . 6/29/2013
hmmmm...I hate that you kinda re-wrote everything in the potter universe-you didn't have to change their looks and i feel like you ruined your story with that.
Harry definitely should have never let the situation with Ginny get to that point-and no REAL parent would go in there slap their kid around and then disown them. If she (Molly) loved her daughter so much she should have tried to get her some help! Not play grandma to her unfaithful husband's kid.
Draco was an ass to Astoria and he had NO right to keep Scorpius away from her.
i'm sorry i love a good yaoi/mpreg story but this was basically a way for you to bash any female character you hated in the books...love the writing style-hate the way you used it.
I enjoyed the interaction between the characters but if you actually think that the behavior Harry displayed is mature then you have alot to learn.
Ariel was cute (kinda a surprise), Teddy was perhaps the most mature character in the story so i wished we could have seen more of him:D
Despite the contents of my review I really did enjoy this story-i just disagreed on how some of the situations were handled.
| Guest chapter 10 . 6/29/2013
i have to say...I love this story. Don't get me wrong I HATE stories that demonize Ginny simply because they don't like her- and honestly I think they should have just shared custody- but i love the way this was handled.
Do i think Harry is an angel-absolutely not. Ginny was hurt-Harry cheated on her and justified it as "part of the job" only then to divorce her, curse her from the house so she was unable to see the kids, and take on the job of raising HER kids around his illegitimate child. Trust me Harry has ALOT to make up for in the husband department.
BUT...Ginny did cheat on him numerous times (friends refused to help) although she was unhappy she should have learned to deal with such feelings rather than sneaking away.
The kids reaction was somewhat of a baffle-i'm sorry no matter WHAT kids that young would not be so nonchalant about their mother's disappearance.
I like the story but please keep it realistic and unbiased...i really you like Harry but he is not perfect.
| RachelTheSilentKunoichi chapter 21 . 5/15/2013
This is one of my favorite stories 3
| PadfootsGirlxxx chapter 21 . 3/22/2013
and remember when draco used to tease the weasleys for having so many kids...
| Slut On Wheels chapter 12 . 3/14/2013
There seems to be a lot of ruffling of children's hair in this fanic.
| vgriffin4 chapter 21 . 2/22/2013
GREAT STORY LOVED IT. YOU TRULY HAVE TALENT FOR STORY TELLING. ALTHOUGH I WOULD HAVE WISHED TO SEE A FEW MORE KIDS. KEEP WRITING YOU ARE GOOD.
| Kilko chapter 7 . 2/14/2013
I'm going to flame!
DRACO HATES HARRY! WHY ON EARTH DO YOU THINK THEY WOULD FALL IN LOVE. HARRY LOVES GINNY! GINNY IS MY FAVOURITE CHARACTER OF HARRY POTTER! AND I JUST KNEW THAT SHE AND HARRY WOULD GET TOGETHER! DRACO MALFOY IS NOT ATTRACTED TO HARRY IN ANY WAY! IF HE WAS HE WOULD HAVE USED HIS 'SLYTHERIN TRAITS' TO GET WITH HIM!