|Reviews for Color Drain|
| CuteVampireCollie chapter 1 . 2/18/2012
Oh my goodness, I squealed so bad and hyperly when it said that Mijumaru and Tsutarja bumped noses! I don't know why but it looked so dang cute in my head! XP But I really like what White did to get away from N and the implied White/Black. w giggles softly Although I didn't know N could be called Gray. XP
| Hidden Lines chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
A shadow flitted through his crimson gaze. "Someone like you shouldn't have to wait alone. Say, do you know how much a male Ursaring weighs?"
The question caught her off guard. "Um, pardon?"
"Just enough to break the ice." He grinned wider and winked at her, and White laughed despite herself.
I lol'd. That was funny.
| xSayori chapter 1 . 4/1/2011
What a nice beginning
| Anon chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
Hm. The only thing that bothers me is his "name". N is N. That's his confirmed name; his "codename"; probably the only thing we'll know him as. He's no rival - Cheren and Beru are the rivals - he's the antagonist, so I don't know why he would be named after the third version (assuming that that is going to be the name of the third version judging by the patterns).
But aside from that, you're a good writer.
But I did spy some grammar mistakes. :/
| stupid-tai chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
when i saw WhitexN, i was reluctant to read it, but the end and how well it was written tided me over.
| mochicocoa chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
Yay for Chessshipping! :3
Adorable :3 I love how Tsutarja totally pwned Gray. :D
Good job! ;D
| aestheticisms chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
Stop comparing yourself to me, you put my writing to shame; this is EPIC WIN.
Amazing, as always. xD Yay Gray/N/Crimson! :D He's freaking awesome
| Blushing.Violet chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
"Her Pokémon seemed very happy and playful again in the presence of the Water-type instead of being frightened and angry, like with Gray's Pokabu.
Trust your Pokémon."
Seriously, that last line just hit me so hard. Epic, truly. You did a wonderful job with this, as always. Keep up the good work! :3