|Reviews for Sheltered|
| VG LittleBear chapter 1 . 2/26
Hi, I am so glad that you let them all survive. Tim's voice was very clear and true. I could feel along with him. I'm glad he found his resolve. Tony and Gibbs were described so well too. Thank you!
| Sonic Serendipity chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
I'd'a loved to read that epilogue, but c'est la vie, I reckon! The Tim PoV for this story is great, and I love seeing Gibbs from McGee's perspective. Semper Fi indeed.
| suchaun chapter 1 . 6/18/2013
| Long Live BRUCAS chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
At least they were found.
I was a bit worried with Tim and his thoughts and dreams.
This was really good. Hope you come back for an epilogue at some point.
| Pissed Off Poet1 chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
You know I read this story a few times now, and it's a great story. But I would have liked to think that Ziva had something to do with finding their location. I imagine her braking Harrison within moments of entering the interrogation room.
Also there must be something mentioned of the fact that Gibbs went so long without his coffee.
I hope you find more inspiration to do an epilogue.
Again, great story
| Pol chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
I would desperately, DESPERATELY love to read the epilogue :)
| Kayli chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
This was spectacular and you kept everyone in character really well.
| Tiva-McAbby4Life chapter 1 . 12/5/2012
Really graphic story and extremely well written. I felt everything all three men were going through in this piece, especially Tim obviously. Really great fic! :) x
| Hopelesshopefulromantic chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
Boss I'm wounded! Haha so funny. But seriously. Great story. You captured the characters and the scenario perfectly. Props to you
| earthdragon chapter 1 . 10/24/2012
This was a really exciting story ... but frustrating at the end. I know, from your end notes, why you have marked the story complete, but it really does need more adding to it, just to round it off in a satisfactory manner. After all, although you say Fornell found them and Tony made a full recovery, what about Harrison and the kidnapped boy. Was the boy found alive or dead?
| Washington-Jones chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
They're saved, aren't they ?
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/27/2012
WHO WAS AT THE DOOR
| CindyT63 chapter 1 . 3/20/2012
Oh my god. That was one deep character study. At first, I wasn't thrilled with the lack of dialogue, but as I read, I saw that really was your intent all along. Well done! Whew!
| Me chapter 1 . 3/17/2012
Good story, but it felt like you were telling us instead of showing us. Maybe try using senses a little more? I'd suggest more dialogue, but apparently they weren't really talking much? Anyway, an interesting story. Thank you for sharing it with us.
| Tacpebs chapter 1 . 3/2/2012
Very interesting story. I look forward to more.