Reviews for Midnight to the Moon is Sleep to the Beloved
Cam277 chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
:) I really liked the writing style you used to write this, especially putting it in Yoh's POV and describing the temptation that Haruna unconsciously(or is it? lol) subjects him to. They seem like the type of couple who'd behave this way so I reckon you got their chemistry spot on. Thanks for writing such a great fic
patnissandkeeta chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
Okay this is officially my FAVORITE High School Debut fanfic so far. And I've read a couple. But this is whaht I wanted to read after Yoh went off to Tokyo. I love how the series ended with humour, but I wanted a more emotional feel when Haruna came back to visit. And this is what I needed! I love it sooo much, keep up the good work! 3
animeaddict787 chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
Loved it 3 It was exactly how Yoh and Haruna would react after seeing each other :)
TheAirBender chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
This story, I'd say, is perfect and one of it's kind. All I have to say is that you did very well. I give you 10/10
MilkyKnots chapter 1 . 6/25/2011
auwwwh~~ that was nice :') I'm touched.
The Archangel Network chapter 1 . 6/24/2011
I really, really loved this. Great job. :D
Eoeo chapter 1 . 6/20/2011
That was sweet :)
fawnycurly chapter 1 . 6/20/2011
You write really well! It was a short story but brought forth Yoh's thoughts and emotions in a very believable fashion. It also made the fangirl in me squeal! :-)

My one critic would be in the beginning you mention "bemoaning the lack of kotatsu" but then later mention she is lying underneath the kotatsu. A little confusing.
Slytherwatt chapter 1 . 6/10/2011
This is a wonderful take of what happens after. Although the ending of the manga was amusing, it left me quite unsatisfied. So thank you for this! You played Yoh's emotions very well, they were in character, and your writing style's excellent. Kudos to you! :)
wine.and.sun chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
This reads like poetry, like song. You depicted Yoh, Haruna, and the fervency of young love perfectly. The last description of Haruna couldn't be more accurate. When I first started the manga, I thought that she was too sensitive and a bit pathetic, but really, how much courage it must take to be so vulnerable.

Beautiful story :)
isadorator chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
I think this is the first High School Debut fic I've read and actually really liked. You got the complexity of Yoh and Haruna's feelings to show through your words and it felt very poetic. It also felt like grew up a bit in this fic, emotionally as well as physically. Thank you for posting such an interesting story! :)
purpleumeko chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
This is oh so beautiful. I love your writing style, and the flow of the story through Yoh's point of view. I loved the atmosphere between Yoh and Haruna, with them being themselves and yet more mature, feeling more deeply and strongly for each other but still with that pure, unadulterated love.

I really really loved this. Thank you for this wonderful masterpiece, and I hope to read more from you soon.
Trumpet-Geek chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
Ahhh this is LOVELY!
LauraBean13 chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
i love this ! its amazing i can picture it ! and in the manga u didnt really know wat yoh was thinking so keep writing please
mouseter chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
I love this fic! Sensual but not too much and very in character. I also love that it's written in Yoh's pov. It's very hard to pull off but this was just brilliant! I hope you write more! ~
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