Reviews for Wrong
f3arsentinel chapter 3 . 2/13
I like debras reaction to dexter being a serial killer much more then the tv show. It seemed like in the tv show she forgot he only killed murderers and he saved her life and was there for her a lot. So I find this reaction more realistic. I really like this story thank you for uploading :)
mysticexarch chapter 3 . 1/13
1. I always thought that Dexter was way too hard on himself. He calls himself a monster and says that he feels no emotions. But it's VERY obvious that he does actually have emotions. He's not such a bad guy at all. He really cares about people around him and feels regret. They way you methodically point all of this out and offer a defense of Dexter is brilliant.

2. Harry really isn't that great of a guy. He convinced Dex that he was a monster, doesn't have emotions, etc. This was imprinted on Dex's mind and prevents him from knowing the truth about himself. But as we know, Harry was wrong. This idea is something I've been considering for a long time and it is awesome to see in a story. Well done.

3. I agree with your interpretation of how Debra would react. It's more realistic and follows her personality a lot better. Apparently the fact that Dexter kills bad guys is irrelevant to Debra from the show. And she forgot the fact that he really did love Astor, Cody, and Rita. Also she forgot the fact that he killed Brian for her. I mean for god's sake, she was *awake* when Brain and Dexter were talking.

It's great to finally see Debra defend him, as it should have been in the show. Instead we got "suicidal mopey Deb for seasons 7-8."

This is probably the best "Dexter gets caught" story that exists. I wish the show would have gone this route, because it just feels so right. Thank you for writing an awesome story.
Lena Elika chapter 3 . 1/8/2014
Thank you for the story. Realistic and beautifully written. It filled me with warmth and hope for this couple, especially after devastating final season.
Guest chapter 3 . 7/23/2013
that was one of the best stories on Dexter I have read! A new one please :P x
Dhaakshu chapter 3 . 4/26/2013
seriously, i couldn't stop myself from the review, this fanfic is awesome!
i normally read only deb x dex fics more
but this one was not that,but i still loved it, so much
ur an awesome writer
The L. MMonster chapter 3 . 2/21/2013
So cute *-*

I loved it!

Bye
HilsonMarvey27 chapter 3 . 1/23/2013
THIS. THIIIIS. This is sooooooo perfect. I am dying, no wait, scratch that. I am dead. I have perished because of this magnificent, absolutely flawless fic. I am completely in love with this. SO much so. Awesome job :) I hope you write more Dexter fics! :D
Triptix chapter 3 . 7/20/2012
Nice albeit sad little story. Poor Dexter, poor Debra, they're both really fucked up. Good work!
mswyrr chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
This is such a beautifully done story. I realized how much I loved it when I started thinking that I'm not sure how the show can ever do better in its treatment of the "Deb finds out" storyline. You let things unfold so naturally and have such a gift for observation. I love your prose style and how neatly you portray the characters through dialogue, gestures. Thank you for writing this!
Nicole chapter 3 . 5/6/2012
Ahhhhh! I love this story! It was so great! Don't change anything! It's perfect!
Nicole chapter 3 . 5/6/2012
Ahhhhh! I love this story! It was so great! Don't change anything! It's perfect!
ShadowFox chapter 1 . 4/5/2012
Very well done! I like how your story flows. Congrats
LilithL2 chapter 3 . 12/28/2011
F*cking! amazing! congratulations!

i really loved it!

I don't know if you just saw the ending of this season... but... i really hope something like this would happen...

congratulations again...

i'm going to search for more stories of you soon :)
dididouli chapter 3 . 10/21/2011
It was really awesome, it's incredible to think that it's your first Dexter fanfic, you have the characters down well. Thank you for sharing your work with us
Kalida chapter 3 . 10/1/2011
Awesome story... :)

The characters seem very real... And I love Dex/Deb... I loved the fact that Batista tears up when Harrison 'brings up' his breakfast...

"Ask me the question, Deb," I say calmly, although I can feel my heart begin to race.

Simply outstanding scenario...

Your story is original and creative and feels very very real...

Loved it!
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