|Reviews for Enemy of the King|
| Guest chapter 8 . 12/25/2013
Love your humor. Great work
| DeathBerryHime chapter 6 . 7/27/2012
Oh dear lord... Ryuuken is being kind and fatherly to Uryuu... I'm marked for my all lifetimes...
| AzureNemesis chapter 2 . 11/12/2011
What the heck? I read the prologue and this story sounded pretty interesting, and then you completely changed the story's tone. Not to mention all of the plot-holes, why can every Tom, Jim, and Sue see hollows? Where did ichigo get his powers? What is up with the terrible Godzilla jokes? Who the heck wrote your prologue, and where can I read that person's stories?
| Orphiucus chapter 17 . 6/28/2011
i reeeeaaalllllyyyyy like this story.
looking forwards to the next chapter!
(that is if you update soon)
| NewbieWW chapter 17 . 11/23/2010
huh that's not good, it means that the bad people know about their talents now; each of them used the full extent (that we know of so far) of their powers, so now the enemy can analyze their attacks and whatnot.
Why didn't Orihime try to heal those three shinigami from before? They were being possessed as well, she could have healed them.
What happened to the three day update? Apparently it's been almost... uh... (has to count to remember) almost three months (or almost two and a half-ish) since the last update.
Come on, it's one of the best IchiHime stories on this site so far -I can't wait to see what happens!
Hmm are we going to be seeing any of the other people? Like Yoruichi or ...uhh there was somebody else, but I forgot their name...
love your story!
Please update soon D
| NewbieWW chapter 9 . 11/23/2010
haha chad, "This is SPARTA!" lmfao! It's just a coincidence that I had been just telling one of the authors I was helping to go with a 'this is sparta' theme when it came to some uber final battle )
I actually do play CoD2:MW, but I play on playstation and not on Xbox, but my cousin plays on that.
I love how you portray Chad, he's a little boring in the anime/manga (sometimes) it's cool that you can add a humor side to him! Not to mention a kick butt side to Orihime along with keeping her silly and compassionate side. Glad that Ishida could be seen as the friend, yet they still have a bit of bickering fights lol.
| NewbieWW chapter 5 . 11/23/2010
Your going to make me laugh and review on every chapter aren't you?
haha Poor hollow, it tried to ram it's head through the concrete!
lol poor random person, bad things just keep happening to him.
Haha the second omake was funny; boom headshot! Reminds me of call of duty D
| NewbieWW chapter 3 . 11/23/2010
Umm scars...is it Kenpachi?
| NewbieWW chapter 2 . 11/23/2010
oh god I love the homeless guy, especially in the omake and poor random person who keeps getting beat up with random debris!
| zodious chapter 17 . 8/24/2010
3 days? :'( oh well guess skool comes first~XD
Yes i absolutely like kenny~
Still interesting. I cant wait for the next updateXD
| Devilsummoner666 chapter 17 . 8/23/2010
| Parzival vi Britannia chapter 17 . 8/23/2010
pretty nice fic!
| Majin Hentai X chapter 17 . 8/23/2010
Interesting if a little cliche. The concept your elemental realms is very dated and cliche but gets the job done.
At least Chad isn't losing every other battle. Why the hell isn't Uryu using the sanrei glove, ginrei kojaku or seele scheinder? Unless you made it so Ryuken never applied him self to being a quincy and thus doesn't know those techniques.
So I'm guessing the old man is Ichigo from a future where Aizen wins. Who traveled back in time inside his own inner world when Aizen rewrote thew timeline to suit his own desires. This Ichigo is being set up to fail to sate Aizen's sick sense of humor.
And I'm guessing Yoruichi is dead resulting in Urahara insanity because we all know she's the one thing that keeps him from being Mayuri.
This story has a lot of potential you just need to step up the detail in your battles.
| mlkoolc86 chapter 17 . 8/23/2010
That was good, I like the inner conflict you showed with Rukia debating between herself and Viral. I was wondering if she would go through anything concerning her separation from it. Look foward to the next one!
| Lucem Yoru chapter 17 . 8/22/2010
I bet Kenpachi got a case of Deja vu here xD.