|Reviews for Kidnapped!|
| Shiary chapter 3 . 1/7/2011
...I dont know what to say... Im confused about Dan Hiri sunddently reappearing like that and disapearing..was he a ghost?...anyways good storyline. You have a few mistakes that make it hard to read.
| Lili chapter 3 . 8/10/2010
I like the idea, but the overall ending and plot were cliche. I encourage you to check your grammar and spelling. There were so many ways you could've done this.