|Reviews for Escape Plan Green|
| revan0407 chapter 13 . 2/16
you know ever sense that happed to me in the game I hated dio I was so pissed I could not get revange
| enchanted cross chapter 13 . 2/13
This is so funny! I can't wait for an update!
| Ms. Zeal chapter 13 . 12/18/2013
Hey, Mystic 777!
Very nice parody! I'm very much enjoying this story! Cloud's 'treasure sense,' his odd effect on chocobo (I particular enjoyed him standing out in the grasslands and uttering one monotone 'wark,; thus attracting a veritible herd of birds), Kunself's extensive information network, Zack's pet materia, a more in-depth look at 'fury' and 'sadness' aliments, helpful (and only slightly rabid) fanclubs that apparently span the globe... You have done an amazing job re-writing the game. Although it is very much a comedy story, you've filled in a number of holes in the canon via use of Kunsel's carefully organized clubs (such as how your party actually made it onto the ship in Junon). Well done, indeed. I have very much enjoyed reading this and am looking forward to new chapters!
| ShivaVixen chapter 13 . 11/19/2013
:) excellent as always.
| Reiko x 3 chapter 13 . 11/18/2013
That always bugged me. Dio throws you in prison whether Barret has a gun equipped or not. What the bloody hell is /wrong/ with that moron! Seriously!
| Sekihara Tae chapter 4 . 11/15/2013
This made me laugh so hard my dog started barking at me. XD
| Gamma Cavy chapter 2 . 10/19/2013
I thought that the fanclub for Zack was the Puppy Patrol
| thats pat chapter 13 . 10/18/2013
What can I say, this is really funny. This was on a few favorite lists of several authors and I thought that I would check it out, glad I did.
Your transitions are a little rough in places and grammar is lacking, but the overall story and plot lines hide a lot of it. Sometimes the grammar mistakes are off-putting and they take me out of the story. There is another thing that writers do and that is present and past tense mix up and this story is no different. Unless you are a professional writer and have an awesome team of editors, you are going to make these mistakes. I've seen stories that have two beta readers and still have a ass load of mistakes.
Your creativity and imagination are obviously very vast and I really like the various scenarios that create the comical situation, my two favorites so far has to be Zack covered in mud and the lady of the house asked what his secret to such fine skin was. The other is when Zack convinces the chocobo boy that he can catch a chocobo without lure materia and gets Cloud to "wark" and many chocobos show up.
Keep your eyes open on those grammar and past/present tense mistakes and I look forward to another update.
| The Amazing Emiko-chan chapter 13 . 10/17/2013
Omg! This is awesome! I've watched ff7 advent children and played crisis core. I just started watching a walk through for this part of the story and the way you incorporated Zack into it was brilliant! I hated the fact that Zack died in crisis core and you just made it all better! The characters have perfect personalities that aren't too ooc and I thank you for that! Keep up the good work! P.s. I love kunsels fan clubs! Great idea! You are awesome!
| surban75 chapter 13 . 10/14/2013
I loved the whole chapter! When Cloud just fell the third time just for fun, I laughed so hard on that. Then the whole discussion between Yuffie and Zack about Cloud's treasure sense...really cute!
I don't know if I've said this before, but I really enjoy how you are going with the timeline of the game. Really cute how you are explaining, in an excruciatingly hilarious way, how some of the things are just silly like Barret's situation with the populace of Corel. You know, from the first time I played the game, I wondered the same thing that was Zack's argument. Keep it up!
| Anne Camp aka Obi-quiet chapter 13 . 10/14/2013
You know, it's a bit of a plothole for them to be captured at all, really (that's the original game, not you) because they seriously could have taken most if not all of the monsters/guards/robots sent after them.
Still, I am looking forward to what your Tifa will do to Deo...
I know I fall at least two times...don't remember if I fell a third or not. Hmm.
Anyway, still loving this. :D
| jgkitarel chapter 13 . 10/13/2013
Falling in that section? Nope, you aren't the only one.
Still, the humor value of this series is well worth it. Who would have figured that Cloud was the one with treasure senses and that Yuffie is probably going to be a fan of his, or a bit jealous that he is better at getting things than her.
| waaaaaaah chapter 13 . 10/13/2013
And Cait Sith has joined the party. I'm looking forward to seeing how he adjusts to their weirdness :)
| zexydemyx66 chapter 13 . 10/13/2013
Nice. Never played the game. Good chapter, though. Please write more when you can.
| Guest chapter 13 . 10/13/2013
Zacks and Aerith kissed *fangirling* Aww why did Caith Sith had to ruin it D: any way nice chapter the cliffhanger really keeps it exciting.
Btw do you already have in mind if Cloud or Zacks get Ultima Weapon (sword). You don't need to tell who it's going to be if it's a spoiler just say if you already have in mind who it is, is enough for me.