Reviews for Metamorphoses
Sreya chapter 9 . 2/11
Okay, all caught up now. I really love this. There's a beautiful rhythm to Delenn's narrative, and it easily fits into the themes of the show.
Sreya chapter 3 . 2/10
Wow, I'm just blown away by this. The level of detail is fantastic - the way the changes would feel, the emotional turmoil. And the characters' voices are perfect. I can easily hear them as I read.
pausilla chapter 9 . 9/9/2016
I love your stories, Babylon 5 is one of my favorites tv shows ever, I watched in the 90's for the very first time and a million times after that.
I think you got absolutely the personalities of the characters, I really love specially your Ivanova and Sheridan (I just love the little voice inside the John's head) and Delenn of course.
... anyway a lot of thanks for update and share your writing with us.
Paulina :)
Indygodusk chapter 9 . 8/29/2016
Oh my gracious, you pull at my heart strings. I love the relationship between the two of them that you are showing us here. I love the human shop keeper helping out Delenn too. The actions in your fic speak so loudly. I'm so glad I discovered this today, but sad that it isn't longer. Thank you.
Indygodusk chapter 4 . 8/29/2016
This is wonderful. I find DeLenn's perspective so very interesting. I also like her burgeoning relationship with Sheridan. I'm looking forward to her getting help from Ivanova.
Icefrost1029 chapter 9 . 8/3/2016
I know, I know. I'm ages late on this story, but I keep coming back to it! Wonderful!
keri.mohror chapter 9 . 2/22/2016
I'm thrilled you've taken this up again. My favorite B5 fanfic; I keep coming back to it. Thank you!
es2812 chapter 9 . 2/22/2016
I was immensely happy to get the notification that this fic had been updated after years of inactivity! And what a chapter. The Markab episode is so intense, so incredible, and your writing only made it even more so.

Delenn's characterization in this fic has to be one of the best ones I've ever read, as is John's. I love the fact that their relationship is so strong, and so important to both of them even this early in the show.

Please, keep writing, it's one of my favourite Delenn-centric fics!
Rex Splode chapter 8 . 7/23/2014
This is a good story. id' love to read more of things from her or his perspective, but seeing as the last post was several years ago it seems unlikely, anyway I really enjoyed this story. I found no spelling errors or anything annoying like that, and I also rather enjoyed being able to know what was on her mind as she went about events just before or after and during the moments of the show. Its always interesting to see a scene from another perspective. Keep writing!
Anla'shok chapter 8 . 1/17/2013
This has to be the best written Babylon 5 fic I have read. I must have read this three times and am ashamed I didn't review before.
You captured Delenn's voice in a magnificent way, I can almost hear her narrate at times. She sounds Minbari, and that is a wonderful feat. You've woven her struggles to accept her new body and to deal with her feelings with Sheridan seamlessly in canon, without forgetting the rest of the station and the Season 2 plot.
Your style is amazing, never one does Delenn come through as whiny and I love the depth with which you depict her feelings. We also get great insight on Sheridan.
I hope you will continue to update this brilliant story
AlsoKnownAsMatt chapter 8 . 1/8/2013
What a great story. I've just caught it up and I think this is one of the few good treatments of Delenn's character development as an individual. She is so complex and in so many ways drives the entire show. We see a lot in the show itself but you give those developments more depth.
Given the chronological distance between your chapters, I expect it may be a while before the next one comes out but will definitely look forward to seeing it when it arrives.
Thanks for your obvious hard work on this story.
iges2u chapter 8 . 8/19/2012
At first, this chapter was a little bit confusing. I couldn't help but feel with Delenn and was glad, that at the end of the chapter, things seemed to be getting better. Well written!
winka chapter 8 . 8/10/2012
Super, more please soon !
Janice chapter 8 . 8/4/2012
I am glad you are continuing this story. I've really enjoyed it. I do hope more chapters are forthcoming.
Teddy-wabbitz chapter 8 . 8/4/2012
Good chapter, look forward to the next.
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