Reviews for I'm on the team?
Guest chapter 1 . 6/19/2013
Ok mre action
Su-Ji chapter 7 . 5/8/2013
Good story, but PLEASE fix grammar and spelling.
AwkwardNinjaStrawbabies-Ishard chapter 9 . 6/8/2011
YALLLLLLLLLLLLL LLOL REALLY
AwkwardNinjaStrawbabies-Ishard chapter 8 . 6/8/2011
GIIIIIIVVVVVEEEE MMMMMMMEEEEE MMMMMMMYYYYYY

BYW GOOOD STORY BUT KINDA CONFUSING
AwkwardNinjaStrawbabies-Ishard chapter 7 . 6/8/2011
jkf v;;;;;;;;;;;;;;; gf

RAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWRRR YOU STUPID PINATA THAT WAZ FUDGIN AWSOMS
AwkwardNinjaStrawbabies-Ishard chapter 5 . 6/8/2011
o m dubble g

if any bodytakes my sayin i will hurt u

buhahahahha im lying
AwkwardNinjaStrawbabies-Ishard chapter 4 . 6/8/2011
wtfm is happining
AwkwardNinjaStrawbabies-Ishard chapter 3 . 6/8/2011
im up at the butt crack of dawn reading yoour story caz its amazing you should read truth or dare by milmilcrystel
AwkwardNinjaStrawbabies-Ishard chapter 2 . 6/8/2011
wtfm(what the fudge muffin)that waz awsom3
AwkwardNinjaStrawbabies-Ishard chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
ihihihih hay how dare you push mr off this amazing cliff i was just look ing at the amazing view menie not it is awsome still eventhough you pushed me
The Queen of Valencia Torgue chapter 9 . 4/30/2011
Nice ending. Cool story!
Lara D chapter 9 . 4/28/2011
Wonderful ending! I'm not sure if I'll be able to read the sequel though. I'm stuck in my studies and my inbox is filling up with stupid mail. :P I wish you luck on your sequel!

You still need some improvement on your punctuation and capitalization, but I've always liked the plot.

Violet was very clever in thinking to multiply herself in order to survive. :)

Keep Writing,

Lara
The Queen of Valencia Torgue chapter 8 . 4/14/2011
This is pretty good! But what is your codename? Mine's Rubbergirl.
Lara D chapter 8 . 4/6/2011
OOOOOOHHH! SUSPENSEFUL!

What I like about your story is that you create such interesting ideas! Embrace that gift!

~LAra
Ae123 chapter 7 . 4/2/2011
LOVE IT! And now I feel like a celebrity (as I mentioned before) because you mentioned me! I can't believe it! You ACTUALLY REALLY MENTIONED ME! Any way, I'm reading your story over and over, it's so awesome! Its like I'm addicted to your writing or something. Can't wait for your new chapter! And btw, you're really funny too!
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