Reviews for One More Try
LouiseUchiha chapter 1 . 6/5/2014
NaruFreak91 chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
I do agree you do have a right to be proud it was an amazing story and yes that song is a great love song not born in the 80's but close enough to it being an early 90's baby off by 3 years.
LunaticV chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
to love the one right in front of you but not being able to get them must have been really hard, yeah?

it was good
SkinnyCow chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
A-MAZ-ING! it was so sweet but not sweet, loved it! Great work. XD