|Reviews for Never Forget|
| Trevor X chapter 1 . 7/16/2010
Reads like a shopping list of weapons and characters. -_-'
Try to use other methods than conversation to show who is entering the tower. Also, you don't need to list a name for every weapon; your audience probably has a good idea what the characters take with them for the final battle. Show your characters gearing up with action - strapping on a sword, checking a pouch for potions, etc.
This has potential to be very good with a bit of rework and some polish.