Reviews for Unaware
B4bidden chapter 1 . 11/13/2019
sad but loved it.
sweetsouthernsongbird chapter 1 . 12/10/2015
Tears, just heartbreaking tears! Seth is love in its purest form.
Whitlock.Mason.McCarty.Cullen chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
oh my gosh... how terribly depressing. It was excellent writing though... what a great plot too!
Silver Winged One chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
So beautiful and tradgic! I loved it and I need to know if Seth OK which means I NEED you to continue this story please! Please don't make Seth die, I don't want him to. Please please please with a happy unharmed Seth on top continue your story at least unrolled Bella and Seth have their well deserved happy ever after.
feebes86 chapter 1 . 11/24/2011
Just came across and read your oneshot... it was heartbreaking. Poor Seth...
Midnightmoon321 chapter 1 . 10/8/2011
can you pleaseeeeeeeee make a second chapter?
Juliana Rain chapter 1 . 9/7/2011
Oh my gosh. . .

wow thats all I have to say wow I loved it!
shailie nieves chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
i dont think you know how much i cried the first timebi read this story...it brought me to my knees and i sobbed as i put my phone down...my mom freaked out thinking i was hurt...then she punched me when i showed her my phone...loved the story...:hate the fact the love of my life had to die...
chst chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
Crying. So sad.
Freaks with Fangs chapter 1 . 2/11/2011
OMGosh! That was wonderfully written, yet it was so tragic! You, my dear friend, have a gift.
moonjellyfish chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
The title, 'Unaware', quite fits the story. I won't summarize how, because you are the author and you know how it fits. The angst near the end was a nice touch, I must admit. How Leah was all desperate for Seth to be alive since their father already died... I couldn't even imagine the pain that Leah would go through, nor would I like to. It must be unfathomable to lose any close family member, actually.

So, nobody else in the pack knew about Seth's imprint on Bella? Nice. It totally compliments the title even more. (If I was Bella, and I was younger, I would've gone with Seth hands-down, but since she was older and in love with two other people, I could imagine that complication.)

It must of been hard on Seth... To die without anybody knowing of your imprint on someone that is going caused even more fights between vampires and vampires, werewolves and werewolves, and vampires and werewolves.

I couldn't even imagine...
little claireina cullen chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
awww thats so sweet i actually cried :L lol
Master Lisdt chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
Waaah! Seth DIED! This story TOTALLY made me cry! I super love your writing and story. Good job. :')
sixdegreesofseperation chapter 1 . 9/24/2010
Made me cry... you should write a multi chapter seth/bella story (:
orestessober chapter 1 . 9/2/2010
fucker update
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