|Reviews for The Pain of Vogler|
| xdfcgvhbnj chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
My god, who the hell would want a "friend" like Wilson? Get some dignity House, and kick the crap out of him.
| Katrick4ever chapter 1 . 10/18/2010
LMAO house did need that
| the little spanko chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
Great story! You have the makings of being a great writer, so KEEP WRITING. The story line was great, as were their reactions - also, I simply adored the way you described the spanking! So hot! There is one critique to make, and it is extremely common with new writers: in your dialogue, you have your characters address each other by name too much. If you read aloud the dialogue only - you can divide it up into the individual scenes to really see what I mean - you'll know what I mean. Don't despair, I used to do the same thing. Fix this little thing and you'll come off as a well seasoned writer [you're already a well talented one!].
| MeggieGirl chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
Awesome Story,please Continue!
| Aquarius Seth chapter 1 . 7/16/2010
Laughed my way through this one. Thank you for sharing. :)