Reviews for STAR WARS:CLONE WARS:The deflected Jedi:Naruto
Guest chapter 1 . 12/18/2016
Please change the title
blazenite104 chapter 11 . 8/21/2016
honest thoughts at this point are that it's not bad, but Bariss may as well not be used at all, considering her relevance. another thing is that Naruto has suffered no major setbacks. maybe it was coming but, just hasn't happened yet I still feel as if he needs to be destroyed by someone.

another thing is that while it's actually reasonable to assume the CIS have a genuine cause (the republic is corrupt to an extent, blame palpatine) the CIS are just as bad really. only they decided to start a war over it.

finally it's a trope and overdone where he just decides that he is completely justified in everything he does. he's acts like Suzaku (code geass) with an agenda of Lelouch (a rebellion but the guy just wants to blame everyone but, himself and refuses to take responsibility for his actions.)
Guest chapter 1 . 5/17/2016
You fool you just had to fucking add other naruto characters
Guest chapter 14 . 4/1/2016
I feel like if this ever continued it would build up to Barriss's loss of faith with the republic and Naruto's eventual downfall in to darkness and regret
Guest chapter 1 . 9/17/2015
the deflected jedi?

example: the jedi raised his lightsaber and DEFLECTED the shot right back at the droid.

synonym: ricochet, avert or pivot
TSAImpregnable chapter 6 . 8/3/2015
That was awesome, while yes it probably COULD have been better, you have no reason to doubt yourself that was great all the way through.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/27/2015
Is it minato or naruto? They aren't the same thing. Two left the temple, then "minato" minato comes in and you remove naruto, then you add and replace naruto with minato back and forth back and up your mind. Is he Minato or Naruto. He can't be both
avidreaded chapter 14 . 4/15/2015
Please update this its absolutely amazing and I'm dying to read more.
Guest chapter 7 . 11/11/2014
Will Naruto be going with Barriss or hinii (spelling?)
Guest chapter 1 . 11/10/2014
Would be of a sequel story; get to it, seriously. Anyways awesome story hope you continue writing things like this, next time I'm really interested in seeing a note ptosis Lord turn Jedi or maybe jet I turn sick Lord, not too certain about it; Anyways hope you continue writing/typing here on fanfiction
Guest chapter 1 . 10/31/2014
Can't help it I'm sure you been told before but it is defected no I wouldn't care usually but it is in your title I couldn't ignore it
ddk chapter 14 . 7/10/2014
please update i love this story
TheHokageNaruto chapter 14 . 4/7/2014
Oh. My. God. Fantastic story. Love the plot. I wish it would continue.
Googlemo chapter 14 . 2/1/2014
NICE! Dat twist with Mei was really unexpected. Too bad this story is long forgotten...
Googlemo chapter 9 . 1/31/2014
I really hate big-ass chapters-flashbacks. They are boring and useless, all this shit should be said in 500-1000words.
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