Reviews for The saiyans new adventure!
lonewolf420 chapter 13 . 3/6
Absolutely love the story so far at the one thing that' I would change as you keep saying that Ino could end up with the flowers shop old and alone but she could be with Shikamaru after all don't Nara men always end up with loud Crazy Beautiful Dangerous women, just look at his mom. Ino is perfect for him. Can nag him all the time, dangerous and deadly but too damn good looking to leave. Plus at the rate of the votes she definitely ain't getting Goku. And if Tamari ends up with Goku then Shikamaru won't
Guest chapter 2 . 11/13/2016
You need someone to beta this story. Badly. It has a good concept, but if it's grammar and it's structure suck the story becomes too painful to read.
Guest chapter 10 . 6/16/2016
Itachi is technically not evil because he joined the akatsuki because he couldn't go back to the leaf so yeah plus WHY DID YOU DO THAT! I love it but you
biks.sodhi chapter 1 . 5/5/2016
Don't leave this story please... complete the remaining 2 chapters
Bikiboy chapter 32 . 4/14/2016
Dude your story is awesome
lonewolf420 chapter 22 . 3/28/2016
ok maybe no one else has noticed this but whats up with planet vegeta? from what I understand a small number of low class solders arrived then the top dogs with the king. while others showed in other locations. all where wiped out. so my two questions are: one, are all of them dead now{i.e. no low classes left behind} and two, what if anything are they going to do with the planet? it has advanced tech on it. and has a higher gravity so they can use it to train the shinobi. plus might have the tech. to make a gravity machine. if ones not already present. plus when they are strong enough i.e. the ones that trained on it could even relocate to the planet. have a warrior race or saians and shinobi with the tech on that planet to protect earth from anything in the future.
lonewolf420 chapter 21 . 3/28/2016
good story but what a waist of a chapter. if anything this should be in the pre-chapter
Super Vegeta chapter 32 . 3/20/2016
Are you gonna let Goku,Vegeta or Naruto transformer into a Super Saiyan God? if you do or do not are you going to fuse Gogeta and Vegito with the fusion dance? oh will Gotenks make an appearance? Broly is awesome in this staoru
Super Vegeta chapter 32 . 2/9/2016
Great story I have read this for a while but I
never did a review I think that all the saiyans in the battel should just give their energy to Goku or Vegeta or Naruto and maby Broly to become Super Saiyan Gods it would make it interesting to have Gods vs an army of Demons
Roy chapter 32 . 1/19/2016
Vegeta kick dragnath butt are goku and vegeta going to fuse
Guest chapter 21 . 12/22/2015
shitface hinata sucks
KiSeeker chapter 32 . 10/26/2015
Please I beg of you, don't leave this story unfinished. It's been over 4 years and It is waaayyy too good ! Finish those last two chapters. Pleeaaaassee!
Guest chapter 32 . 9/24/2015
At the end you should wish sasuke as a saiyan
Mermaid's Magic chapter 3 . 7/26/2015
I wonder how the 3rd will react to him being full Sayain?
Super Saiyan Blue Aym chapter 26 . 6/5/2015
That was both hilarious and silly in this chapter! They went to a strange Hades just to play a silly game show! That is the most funniest chapter that I read!
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