Reviews for Undercover
MischievouslyManaged chapter 12 . 4/27/2013
Don drives a pontiac sunburn!
i know what you mean he is defo a ford guy!X
CSISVUGracelandfan16 chapter 3 . 1/29/2011
OMG! Amazing! As soon as they noticed her I had a feeling something exciting would be happenening! OMG Awesome!
McKennaRae24 chapter 17 . 12/20/2010
I just finished reading this story and up to date on the sequel and I just want to say that I absolutely loved this story. It was well written and very intriguing. I couldn't wait to read more and more of this story. Can't wait to read more of "The Days that Follow" Bravo. Looking forward to more.

~McKenna Rae
NYPDAngell chapter 17 . 10/2/2010
Amazing ending to an amazing story but how could you leave it like that?

And i love Jo btw. I wasn't expecting her to be as good as she is but damn i was wrong.

Anyways, hope to have a sequeal soon.
jessicaflack chapter 17 . 10/1/2010
Whatttt? U ended it just like that? U must write the sequel soon!

I enjoyed this story very much except the part with shay in the story of course. It's a great story! Thanks for keeping Jess alive in it. Sad to see it ended. But I'm really looking forward to the sequel.

Great job Serena!
saturn567 chapter 17 . 10/1/2010
loved it!
Runner043 chapter 17 . 10/1/2010
The last chapter?... oh, girl, there'd better be a sequil!

"constantly needed rescue from choking on tiny objects"... oh, you nailed that one, that's for sure!

So good that Angell felt the need to tell him the truth before telling him 'yes'.

Looking forward to the sequil!
4N6 Anthro Nut chapter 17 . 10/1/2010
Can't wait for the sequal. So exciting. great job
chlo14writes chapter 17 . 10/1/2010
Ooh the evil cliffhanger. I loved this story! It was one of the best 'Jessica turning into the FBI" I've *ever* read! I agree with you about Jo. I miss Stella, but Jo's BYOB (bring your own body) comment and Danny and Sheldon's reaction cracked me up. She can stay. (like my permission matters lol)
saturn567 chapter 16 . 8/26/2010
awesome job!
Runner043 chapter 16 . 8/26/2010
Angell's right... she is safe. Physically, that is. The only place she's in danger is in her own mind, which is probably worse. Very good chapter.
jessicaflack chapter 16 . 8/25/2010
So it's a nightmare. I'm so relieved.

I like the ending ;). They both needed that.

Good work!

PS: I like your idea about writing an M-rated version of the scene of this chap ;)
saturn567 chapter 15 . 8/25/2010
awesome update!
jessicaflack chapter 15 . 8/23/2010
A cliffie! What happened to Jess? Do u hate Jess? She'd been through the worst things in life. Why did u do it to Don&Jess? I'm mad at u for moment.

But update soon!
Runner043 chapter 15 . 8/23/2010
Oh, yeah... you're mean. But I knew a cliffie was coming, I just knew it.

Glad you got Angell's apartment number down, as #503 is across the hall.

Good that Tammy got put in her place and Angell got her to shut up.

Though for sure that Angell was headed to the local newspaper office for calling Amy a 'Jane Doe' like she wasn't a real person.
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