Reviews for Getting Back What Once Was Lost
Cory5300 chapter 30 . 5/16/2015
I really liked the plot twists and the way you developed the character of Jasper/Major. I also liked having Peter and Charlotte serve in the role of Bella's parents. Your story was different and I really enjoyed it a lot.
kantorkan chapter 23 . 5/10/2015
This story is getting so ridiculous with all of the dumb 't really care what he is hiding it has to be some thing least now we don't have to read how Eddie grabs Bella every time she turns that he is dead what is Aro going to do to them and will they have to kill him also?
kantorkan chapter 22 . 5/10/2015
Really am disappointed in the way you are have spun this is a whiny bitch constantly causing Bella to hurt an want to break up with time you turn around Eddie is grabbing Bella,then he grabs Charlotte,that would never happen since he is not a fighter and she could beat his ass with one hand and Bella is a shield he should never be able to grab her even though she is having flash backs about him attacking her Maria has a vampire that can block gifts there is no way she can beat them with Jasper,Bella,Jane ,Alec along with Peter and Char.
kantorkan chapter 21 . 5/10/2015
Not evil he he ,a waste of her shield there is no way Maria can win so just get to get.
kantorkan chapter 19 . 5/10/2015
Jasper is such a whinny little bitch,Bella deserves to be with the Major not him unless he grows am i not surprised that she lost her memory of him just more crap.
kantorkan chapter 18 . 5/10/2015
Since Aro has said Eddie cannot be killed because he wants him in the guard it doesn't mean he has to be can still read minds without legs,just burn them along with one hand. Aro needs to die along with his bitch Eddie,i don't really think the brothers will mind too much if he is she had been changed months ago Eddie would not have been a problem.
kantorkan chapter 17 . 5/10/2015
My question is,if they aren't coming till March and it is Dec. why not change her now ,knowing her she will be in control by then and then they can kill Eddie since he wil be so pissed that he can't have her blood and will do something why in hell isn't Jasper trying to find out who left the notes for he isn't why isn't Peter since he is her father? lots of plot holes just like the original books.
kantorkan chapter 16 . 5/10/2015
Why does everyone write Emmett as a flat out idiot,he was not like that in the books or needs to find out who left the note for the walking dead Eddie.
kantorkan chapter 13 . 5/9/2015
I don't give a crap who she is she betrayed all of them for is betraying her mate and the rest of her family for one along with the rulers of the vampire world.i really don't think the family should decide i think the ruler should be doing it they need to put her on trial.
kantorkan chapter 10 . 5/9/2015
give you an 8 for the first could have been longer.
kantorkan chapter 8 . 5/9/2015
Just how stupid is Eddie right in the middle of the Volturi he attacks the most feared vampire in the world and thinks he can get away with it.i still think Carlisle needs to be punished for not raising the child right trying to raise him as a Humon and not a vamp.
kantorkan chapter 7 . 5/9/2015
Maybe now they can both get their shit together,if you let them,until it is time to go take care of me guess Eddie will some how be involved it getting her into Maria's of killing him he is left alive to make his mischief.
kantorkan chapter 6 . 5/9/2015
It's wracking through her he be destroying Eddie in the next chapter to save her from him since i gather she is his singer and that is why he wants her?
kantorkan chapter 5 . 5/9/2015
Eminem lets find out about the "real Alice".how will we find out about the faux Alice and when we do what will happen to second guess, it is the Romanians behind it.
kantorkan chapter 4 . 5/9/2015
Story is a little will the bad guys come into play? does the faux Alice have some kind of control over Eddie? how soon after they get to Volterra will he be changing her ?i really think she should not be changed until she is at least twenty so she at least will be an adult for eternity.
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