Reviews for Getting Back What Once Was Lost
Babysis64 chapter 2 . 5/2/2013
wow I think this chapter was good too. The way Bella did try to talk to Jasper and she didn't get too until they were in history class together and wow did Bella ever blurt things out to him huh. also what is Alice up too and why is she using every one around her Jasper Edward and who else is she screwing in that family i wonder. gross with her and i hope she gets it as bad as Aro too.
Babysis64 chapter 1 . 5/2/2013
this was a good beginning and yes i do hope that things will work out for the best. The one thing i don't like about Aro is he is greedy and wants Bella and Jasper to serve for them that isn't fair at all now is it. I hope Aro gets what is deserved to him on the come back
Gema9908 chapter 30 . 4/8/2013
loved it
LadySixx chapter 30 . 3/7/2013
This was a great story, I loved it
pwrmom2 chapter 30 . 2/18/2013
Loved this! Great job
Guest chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
really good.
brandys0524 chapter 6 . 8/16/2012
godess bubbles chapter 30 . 7/15/2012
I love the story!
MCR Killjoys chapter 30 . 7/7/2012
this story was really great i enjoyed reading it

Becky xxx
brokenfromthepast chapter 30 . 6/26/2012
This was a great story. I loved Majorette. Hope there will be a sequel!
XAngelofMercyX09 chapter 30 . 3/15/2012
I really loved this story I think that you did a really good job.
Guest chapter 30 . 3/14/2012
I'm Pretty much crying my eyes out right a now!

I cried & laughed & fuck this story was just fucken awesome! Freakin loved it! Poor Jazzy & Bellzzy wen they had to be separated...God I hated that part! I almost didn't read & just almost skipped it...Almost, but I didn't.

Anyways I really liked it...great job! )
XAngelofMercyX09 chapter 1 . 3/13/2012
Right off the bat, I have to say that I agree with taking the Major for a ride(a long on at that), but maybe we could also add in his captain and have some with him too.

It was a good first chapter. I want to let you know that since it is already complete I will submit one final review after I finish reading this story. I just don't have the time to review each chapter.

I can't wait to read more.
darkangel0212 chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
keep up the good work on your stories
madyashiefan chapter 4 . 1/19/2012
You're trying to put details in without actually writing them. Also why does the "real" Alice have to be locked up? If she's evil make her evil don't stop half way and say "actually I'm going to add another character who also can see the future and is making alice look bad when she's actually really nice." It's just silly and confusing and quite frankly this story could have been excellent with the plot you've made but it's not.
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