|Reviews for As Lovers Go|
| BubbaToot chapter 1 . 2/12
Wow ... just wow
I loved this story. My only criticism is that it's only one chapter! I want more
| erf10722 chapter 1 . 10/19/2014
This was wayyyyy too adorable! The metaphors were so relatable and awesome and the figurative langurage was beautiful and I kind of liked that Dally was OOC. :)))))
| ranesbitt13 chapter 1 . 8/24/2014
i giggled like a walrus out of pure happiness when i read this it is perfect! Love- Rebekah
| Betty chapter 1 . 5/4/2014
Ohmigosh! This is beautiful! My feels, just * poof * . Thank you for contributing to fandom!
| Captain chapter 1 . 9/26/2013
mY FEeLS /HEART BURSTS INTO RAINBOWS AND FEELY TEARS
| wingswordsandmetaphors chapter 1 . 6/19/2013
I think Dally wasn't OOC as much as his speeches weren't phrased quite right- I think, if you made his longer dialogue sections a bit more terse and choppy, then the openness of them would have seemed a bit odd, but definately plausible. I like how you managed to retain Johnny's innocence while giving him that element of boldness that he probably would've gained after the fire had he not died. Also, I love the glass door and shelf simile and metaphor, especially the way you blended them into the story so flawlessly. It sounded really natural the way you incorporated them.
| Rose chapter 1 . 2/7/2013
Wow. Just... wow. You might be the best writer I've ever seen; this story was beautiful. I seriously don't have words for this, just... wow.
| The French Orchid chapter 1 . 5/26/2012
THIS IS GREAT! I've been looking for it! I read it a couple of years ago I loved it then, now I read it every once in a while. Keep up the good work.
| ofnisaofunsdf chapter 1 . 12/5/2011
| violentluck chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
*happy tear* ...no words...just no words. You have no idea how much i enjoyed this, how real this felt to me.
| HatterKing222 chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
I can not stop smiling when I read this it makes me to happy!
Please right more!
| MrMissMrs Random chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
...*bowing to the greatness that is this story*
| Savage Deathbite chapter 1 . 3/1/2011
This is beautiful u should make a story out of it :)
| IFoundHopeInYourHateForMe chapter 1 . 1/6/2011
That was so cute
| Kitadresdencinnazia chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
omg luv this u r excellent! i never htought i would find anything like this because it wuz like the sixties and homosexual wasn;t even in the dictionary yet! this is awsome!
keep writing this is one of my favrorites that's for sure!