|Reviews for Whispering Words|
| tanseynz chapter 17 . 5/3
A wonderfully complex and original plot. Your handling of the canon characters in your own reality was masterly, and I really liked the way you twisted original plotlines. With a little tweaking and a lot of editing (role is not roll, pus is not puss and apart is very different in meaning from a part)this would be one of the more interesting & original ST fanfictions.
| DChan21 chapter 17 . 3/22
This story was soooo good! OMG I love it! I hope you decide to do a sequel and see Spock and Kirk's relationship flourish with Ayel!
| DarkLadySethra chapter 16 . 1/18
I've already posted a comment on here, but I just realized something. Sorry if I'm bothering you with this, but you left this story unfinished on the K/S archive and I was wondering of you could post the last chapter on there?
| risky chapter 17 . 12/4/2014
oh. mai. goodness.
I am bawling so hard I can barely *breathe*.
that was so incredibly beautiful and I feel struck dumb before it. I opened it expecting something interesting, and hoping for something good, and what I found was something -incredible-. I feel honored just to have been able to read this, so thank you, so much, for sharing this with us.
now if only I could stop crying ;-;
| Guest chapter 17 . 10/14/2014
This is amazing, and one of the best AUs I've read. I love it! Thank you for giving life to Ayel, he'll remain one of my favourites from this moment on.
Please, if you can, make a squel that shows Jim's love and struggles with Spock and Bones, (mainly Spock) I'd love to read it :)
| KLS-Blueskies chapter 9 . 8/1/2014
ok I've read the reviews for this chapter and is just wondering how no-one else is wondering if Pike and Spock want to bone each other...ehhem i meant if they are getting intimate
| turtlehannah96 chapter 17 . 7/27/2014
Oh my god I LOVED your story! it was beautifully written and the way you protrayed ayel really touched me. Just wanted to let you know :3
| MuggleCreator chapter 17 . 7/16/2014
Wow. Just WOW. I loved this story. Your characterisations... The way you twisted things...
| catbob1 chapter 17 . 6/26/2014
I was uncertain of this story after reading the synopsis but was intrigued enough to read it anyway. I am very glad I did. The story was simply fantastic. Jim's conflict and the final resolution were great. The way the story fit the movie and the little twists made for enjoyable reading. Thank you.
| HPMARIE chapter 17 . 5/13/2014
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/6/2014
This story is worth reading just for your characterization of Ayel
| twilightserius chapter 17 . 4/29/2014
the end made me cry
| mfm2885 chapter 3 . 4/17/2014
I read the entire fic, in my computer, but I'm not logged, so I will review on this chapter, ok?
Your idea is absolutely great. I wonder how no one thought of that. You wrote the scenes so perfectly, as if the movie and series were actually about Jim's life being a lie. I absolutely loved what you did with him! Uhura was also incredible and that's a plus - I don't like her. I LOVED Bones speech on the moment he was about to kill Spock! I LOVED Spock and Jim's interaction - since the Kobayshi incident until the end - and I also LOVED the elder spock scene. Awesome.
How you played with Jim's notions of morals when he was Romulan is also fantastic, I am impressed about how easily it fits (and about how easily you made it look like). Also, what he said to the crew: family, honor, love... And the way he spoke with Bernatt (?) was AMAZING! Congratulations. You had me the whole time, I couldn't breathe until the next chapter and I didn't rest until it was over.
You have my admiration and my respect.
| Doni chapter 17 . 4/16/2014
Closure is always good, especially on such a unique story. A hopeful future for a twisted life. Well done.
| soulfert chapter 17 . 4/11/2014
this was the best star trek fic I have ever read.