|Reviews for He is Mine|
| Hollow Ichigo-Ichigo chapter 9 . 12/30/2010
lol man up. i'm still waitin for Grimmta ruin stuff up.
| Hollow Ichigo-Ichigo chapter 8 . 12/30/2010
lol nice! They gots into a fight.
| Hollow Ichigo-Ichigo chapter 7 . 12/30/2010
maybe they can fix things up now? or will there be more drama 1st? O.o
| Hollow Ichigo-Ichigo chapter 6 . 12/30/2010
ur makin me cry...please say one of them isn't gonna go off the deep end and...DX i like angst, but only when i'm doin it! T_T
| Hollow Ichigo-Ichigo chapter 5 . 12/30/2010
i call for a fight! Please be a bloody one! XD srry...that's my nature. i enjoy a good angst fic!
| Hollow Ichigo-Ichigo chapter 4 . 12/30/2010
and things get complicated. If u added Shiro in here, things would get much more complicated. XD
| Hollow Ichigo-Ichigo chapter 3 . 12/30/2010
oh, ouch. Ichi got him there! XD
| Hollow Ichigo-Ichigo chapter 2 . 12/30/2010
Aww...Ichi likes Toshi, but Toshi wants nuthin but smex from him. how cruel! XP
| Hollow Ichigo-Ichigo chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
i'm breaking the taboo my sis set up: no HitsuIchi, but i wanted ta read this, and i'm glad i am! i feel bad 4 Ichi here...XP
| ShirukuKage chapter 10 . 12/13/2010
I also read this story awhile ago and apparently like before I never reviewed it, I have such a bad memory sometimes. So I am sorry that I didn't do so before and for the fact that I didn't review each chapter individually, I just can't seem to stop myself when reading such good work (I'm pathetic).
Anyway, I wanted to thank you for creating such an interesting story and world. I loved all of the emotions that you conveyed as well as the plot twists that only enhanced the feelings that Ichigo and Toshiro have for each other.
This review is so pathetically short for such an incredible story but I have so little idea of what to say to properly get across my admiration of this work.
I just absolutely loved how you showed their relationship and then proceeded to progress from them being just roommates and 'friends' to true lovers.
Then the added element of angst and tension that were brought about because of Grimmjow's character and Ichigo's need to feel like he was part of a 'real' relationship and seeking it out in Grimmjow's character were just magnificently portrayed.
The mean streak in me also enjoyed Toshiro's feeling when he discovered that someone else might actually be interested in Ichigo. I felt that if Toshiro had truly wanted (loved) Ichigo then he would have let him know during any of the times that Ichigo basically asked. It certainly seemed beyond naive for him to think that Ichigo would have been happy staying in a relationship that had no deeper feelings to it, when Ichigo is clearly a very loving person.
Even with the way I kept changing my mind on who should ultimately end up with Ichigo at the finish (yes I kept debating, but can you blame me Toshiro was staying so cold), I am glad that Toshiro finally admitted to Ichigo (and himself) that he loved him and that they were the ones that stayed together.
This was another job well done and I'm so glad that you took the time to not only write but post this so that we could enjoy it! You're such a great author! Keep up the great work.
Oh, a small side note-You said that this story was finished but it's not marked as complete, to gain the attention of shier fans (those who don't read incomplete/continuing stories) you might want to fix that.
| drowsydoe chapter 2 . 12/3/2010
Hoy, A BIT WORDY, BUT GOD, FOR YER FIRST LEMON, THAT'S FRIKKEN AWESOME :'D.
| wishyful chapter 10 . 10/27/2010
SO CUTE! What a cute way to end it! I love how you get over the male/female stereotype scenario. Not exactly a conclusion but an acceptance, exactly what a relationship is. I like how you actually went up to the challenge of Ichigo actually sleeping with Grimmjow instead of backing out at the last minute like lots of authors do, I really appreciate it! Now I wonder what Shinji does with Nnoitra, hint hint! XD Love this and I am very glad to have read it. Thank you!
| Oni Princess Melloney chapter 10 . 10/17/2010
Ahhhh! I am so much a fan forbthis pairing! I love you writting this awesome story!
| In The Mix chapter 10 . 10/4/2010
Awwwwww I like it! Please UPdate soon!
| goldenXdragon chapter 10 . 9/28/2010
YAY! i love the ending!