|Reviews for The Rise Of Kronos' Revival Squad|
| The Exiled Outcast chapter 3 . 2/7/2012
A Percy Jackson fan too? Hmm, I got a fun idea for a new story! PM if you wanna partake in Greco-Roman chaos! ;)
| MP chapter 1 . 9/25/2010
I enjoyed the plot and there was a lot of anticipation about what would happen next..a very interesting story, and I want to read more!.
Grammar needs improvement..using "us" when it should read "we". Use of quotation marks appropriately and consistently throughout the story would improve understanding. If youwant more critique I can read each line more slowly and realllllllly provide you some feedback.
I hope you publish these stories..I really enjoyed reading this.